|Reviewed by jude forese
|because society is based on greed and the worship of material things ... the celebration of individuality and its legacy is replaced by personality worship ... unfortunately, the spirit of Christmas resides in an empty gift box ...
well written poetic query ...
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Very clever write Grumby...it is true that only a chosen few can recognize others for what is possessed inside. Great work.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|"So why arenít people treated like Christmas presents?
paying less attention to the wrap and more to the Essence "
Good question my friend!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A very good question at the end, Gumby.
I saw you on the SNL Christmas Special last night, and you were very good!
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|I am liftin my rootbeer mug to you in a salute! You are truly a wise Little Green Dude! Wishin Ya a Merry Whatever! SC|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Wonderful question? Leaves one to ponder and speculate, but never finding the answers, right? God bless you and try to have a very Merry Christmas. After all it is Jesus's birthday, isn't it.....
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Retailers round the world can go to Hell
Cause I won't be ringing their Cash bell" . . . . This mind-set sir, is mixed in with my own too.
In my mind Edward, this write is a cleverly cynical twist on 'The Night Before Christmas'. Your heart is showing beautifully, and your inimitable wit is as sharp and satisfying as ever. The analogy you create between presents and people is brilliant!
Have a blessed holiday season, and all the best to you in the coming year.
Light and Wisdom ...
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|THAT, my kind sir is the sixty-four dollar question . . .|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Great write, Gumby, with a super message therein! Great job; bravo!
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
|Reviewed by Jennifer Butler
|But I really like the wrap.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Amen, Gumby, Amen.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
We're too caught up in the commercialism, we've forgotten the Real Reason for the Season. Excellent.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Blessed be the author of this aliment for the souls, and sustenance for the intellect. Art, knowledge and wisdom met to develop the imagery of this composition.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU