A Jasmine Scented Memory
by Southern Comfort
Friday, December 14, 2007
Rated "R" by the Author.
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For months he had dwelled in the shelter of her love, now she was just a jasmine scented memory.
He had driven many miles for her jasmine scented embrace,
He had requested for them to meet face to face.
She was waiting with open arms to welcome him in,
Many kisses were exchanged as soft lips did blend.
He exposed his body and also his mind,
She was warm and loving, he did find.
His unloved body responded to her magic fingers and craved more,
With each kiss and caress, it sighed, encore!
She granted his body, the warm glow of bliss,
He delighted in her long, coffee colored hair, it was a fragrant jasmine mist.
Her soft ivory breasts pillowed his head,
She took him to a peaceful place, she assured him he had nothing to dread.
Her soft, gentle voice lulled him to sleep,
Though a strom raged outside, he was safe within her keep.
For one brief moment in time,
He lay sheltered in her love and felt warmth so sublime.
Now all that remains is a jasmine scented memory, for him to recall,
A once upon a time, that happened in Fall.
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|Reviewed by Rick Mizuno
|I so enjoy the scent of Jasmines so when I saw your title I had to read it... I was not disappointed.
"Her soft ivory breasts pillowed his head"... nice.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|What a beautiful tender Poem!
I love the imagery Sweet SC!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
|Reviewed by Silent Dream
|A very sweet memory shared ;) ((LOve ya)) ~yourDreamyGal|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|This is very beautiful. Very soft and tender.
Peace, Love, and Light,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow, if this was just a one time physical affair...how could anyone go back to just the memory of love across the miles...
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Ahhh, but the scent of Jasmine will forever remind him of his encounter. Such clarity and creativity.....
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|memories are made from moments like these!!
|Reviewed by M Wood
|Beautiful feeling in this one SC|
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Sweet, gentle jasmine scented write. Even threw in some nibbins for good measure. Thank you.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I'm lo0king for that peaceful place
you speak of.
excellent write my sug a plum