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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
12/27/2007 |
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| OOOOOOOO So Very Well Expressed! Male erotica, so passionate! LOVE YA! SC |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
12/20/2007 |
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| There's a familiarity there, seems. Crazy life isn't it? |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
12/19/2007 |
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Ahhhhhh, Perfectly said and felt! As the steam flows -
I was about to add more, but just this much I simply adored!
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheoxoxoxo
Stay Positive!
P.S. I like your word usage too - sounding a little familiar and a few music notes thrown in, can you catch them! This is a treasure I will SAVOR! |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
12/17/2007 |
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| Love the meaning in the last verse - passion has no script. Imagery could ignite a fire! -Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/17/2007 |
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Steamy hot offering..wow!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
12/16/2007 |
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Love on a jaunt of romantic passion is always an adventure. Love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill |
12/16/2007 |
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Hormones in harmony...indeed just the right poem before bed time...
R~ |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
12/16/2007 |
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...steamy and sensuous Fee...
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/16/2007 |
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| very hot ... explodes with hormones ... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
12/16/2007 |
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| so very sensuous and erotic--the descriptions of touching --very sexy! |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
12/16/2007 |
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Fee, passionate roaming poem!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
12/16/2007 |
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| Lots of passion, nice and romantic |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/16/2007 |
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| I think you melted my computer! LOL |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/16/2007 |
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Wellsir, this stirs things up! Agree with Holly, another chower's in order...make it a cold one (and it's 23 degrees out there)...thanks a lot. LOL (Well done!)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/16/2007 |
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| Quite passionate, Santa Fee - but I hope those little ones don't read this one! |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
12/16/2007 |
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| Just had a shower Fee, but I now I must take a cold one..lol, love Holly |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
12/16/2007 |
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| Great writing sweet man,enjoyed...stay safe and well...Hugssss |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
12/16/2007 |
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Ok Felix do kiss and tell, excitement surpassed, runnway course, male and female, no plan no scheme. Great write, thank you for sharing.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXOX Rose |
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