by Amber V Moonstone
Friday, December 21, 2007
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I am feeling a bit passionate this morning!
by Amber "V" Moonstone
Pondering thoughts futile
My mind wanders toward you,
Distracted beyond all efforts
Awakening to your essence
knowing it was truly yours,
imagining your heart beating
wishing you were with me.
Yearning for your heat
longing for your touch,
unfulfilled desires failing
to be quenched.
Desire is immediate,
lust is prolonged
but consummation is a must
before the desire turns to dust.
Too much absence,
hinders true feelings to evolve,
only leading to disappointment
and severing of all ties.
One cannot live on thoughts alone,
Flesh and blood is required
In order to feel desired.
Loneliness leads to estrangement.
Fleeting thoughts of you
yearning for heated desires
to come to fruition ignored,
surely love will not endure.
Words are no longer sufficient,
Breathing your essence
touching your lips,
hearing your heart,
can only stoke the fire
that dwells deep within my soul,
for I am flesh and blood
filled with quintessential passion!
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|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|What a delightful and lyrical manner of expressing the lusting of a Hot Mama!
"Here, Kitty, Kitty."
Forgive me. Your firey words have flushed out my true nature!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very passionate indeed Amber, warm and sexy all the way.
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|My my my very Passionate poetry-lovely images my great friend-Hope the universe(God) gives you what you want and soon|
|Reviewed by chris stienstra
Just happened to stop by AD today and was pleased to run into one of your poems. I would like to say to Dr. Amundsen, that although everyone is entitled to critique the works on this site, the manner in which it is done is vitaly important. None of us likes every piece ot literiture we read, but, we certainly do not have the right to personally attack an author like Dr. Amundsen has done here. It is obvious that Dr. Amundsen does not have the personal tools to properly critique any work that she has read. Perhaps she should read technical manuals instead, as, these do not require the "personal" envolvement of other literature types. Your works have always been inspiring and thought provoking. They have been real and about the IMPORTANT ideas and ideals in this life.It is through works like yours that others come to understand the earth, environment and humanity. Do not let the bumbling words of an obviously "fractured" reader stay on your doorstep. Get the brrom, sweep it up and put it in the trash where it belongs!
With my very best as always
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I feel a DEEP LONGING here, in your heart crying out in pain for the ONCE TRUE love you ONCE felt and want to feel again!
Beautiful representation of a lonely wanting BACK kind of lovers passion Viv! I love it!
For the ones who don't understand your heart, and share nothing of their OWN heart, leaves me with not much to say! To read someone often and knowing their real passions, helps anyone to know their real heart lessons! and testements to their own faith!
Some people have issues and try to put it on others, for the lack of feeling something they want desperately in their own hearts!
Let it rideeeeeeeeee! my dear, your passion is felt in your heart and through your words!
I feel a craving need to be filled~! :)
Warm love, Warmer hugs and Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady SWEET Sheoxoxoxooo STay Positive!
Without a doubt! :)
- If she was to read mine, I would still let it fly- WHY, because I know my heart and my Lord knows my heart and I know why I write and what I write is to touch the ones it should! and it will in it's time! Just as yours will my Spiritual GREAT loving kind friend!
P.s. Yea, P.S. lol - Viv, must be action taken, and a Brand New Year, for newer OpEN growth lessons! - New Year! New Beginnings - Take the urge and splurge! BE YOU and feel yourself come alive, with the passions inside waiting to be shared at the right time.
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|cold shower time.
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Hot in a v e r y g o o d way ! <3 B r a v a !!|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|The raw need of passions is so near to the raw and impulsive needs of lust. Urgency in the one goes too fast to be absorbed in the other. It all boils down to lust vs. passion for me.
|Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
|One cannot live on thoughts alone,
Flesh and blood required
In order to feel desired.
Pretty straight in my book. A very honest, bare look at emotions vs. hormones. Liked it a lot.
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|Interesting write here my friend...first the passion is very evident in both the words and your writing. The structure does indeed remind me of Beat poetry...while you do have rhythm in this piece, it is composed as if from individual bits of thought, yet the story within the lines in precise. The passion and yearning in this piece is very evident and there is a poignant sense here as well...as if something or someone has been lost. It is an interesing and wll written piece of free verse.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Filled with passion indeed! So much love to give and share needs a warm body to be with. Lovely write.....
|Reviewed by Morning Star
Beautifully expressed desire and passion
yes correct...One cannot live on thoughts alone
Brilliant written beautifully expressed view
Wishing you and your family an abundance of blessings
Peace Love and Joy....Merry Christmas....Morning Star
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Stunning write of passion, unquenched...excellently penned wonderment!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|A beautiful poem for sure Amber, your passion is shared through each line. thank you for sharing.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the passion in these quatrains is really quite moving, Amber ...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|An honest and beautifully described passionate poem! Very deep feelings that need fulfillment!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|One can't live on thoughts alone!
I wake up missing my next future ex.
Long distance relationships only work for passionless people.
Otherwise it blows the mind, and indeed the relationship loses direction, meaning, and keeps ones heart caged....
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|Crystallized & penned through lascivious sheets of passion ~ layered together out of a purity of nature (..)Evol*Ted|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Passionate and Portrayed Beautifully!!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Passionately honest and erotic; thank you for sharing this gift, Amber. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Most passionate, Amber, and what a graphic!|
|Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
|I concur 110%! This poem stated words on my mind when I awakened this morning, missing my paramour. Thanks, Amber, for capturing the essence of my thoughts.|