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Undone (Inspired by E.T. Waldron's 'Mystery Man')
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Friday, December 21, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Now look what you made me do! LOL


... You know you undo me when you
strip me naked, expose all to your
caress - I melt like butter under the
lightning of your touch - there - there -
and there.  Your heat fills me until
there is nothing left but the shuddering
climax ... the soothing rain quenches
and settles the universe back in place.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (12/21)


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Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/23/2007
Wow Karla...this is hot, passionate writing at its best and you sure nailed it as a subject. Love this one best of all of yours to date.

hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 12/22/2007
Karla,
Well, you certainly know how to have a passionate time! Nice sensual poem..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill 12/22/2007
...ditto..... WOW * 3
Becca~
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 12/22/2007
And more Wow's from me
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/22/2007
Wow, Wow, and Wow.
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 12/21/2007
Your pen is very deserving of a beautiful, technicolored rainbow.
Love and blessings!
Susan
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 12/21/2007
And so goeth the next thunder storm quenching the land. One heck of a write filled with beauty....

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by jude forese 12/21/2007
mission accomplished! ;)
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 12/21/2007
wow Karla,,,this is some hot thunder,,,,,,,:)
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 12/21/2007
This is great Karla thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/21/2007
Excellent response to Eileen's challenge; glad you were inspired by such a gifted poetess; she inspires a lot of people here, including me. Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by stan nassano 12/21/2007
what can I say but Rock on,
stan
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/21/2007
Oh girl you truly got INSPIRED with a flash!!

Gotta love it!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by D Johnson 12/21/2007
I had to read Eileen's poem first, glad I did, good on you for your depth of perception.

Peace,
Dan
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/21/2007
hahaha good to know my metaphor got through to you. You did good Karla,causing the storm to split asunder,and reveal its thunder;-)

Love,
Eileen
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