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Always the Rain
Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, December 26, 2007
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Don't know where this came from ... and so, I write.
Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman
Come. Come with me to the birthplace
of lightning and thunder, twins held in check
by forces beyond their control. They will not
emerge until conditions are exactly right - the first,
a bolt of energy pushes its way out, flying 'cross the
room; the second, darker one arrives with a voice that
threatens the walls surrounding it. And always, always, the
rain - the tears of a mother mourning the loss of her children...
(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (12/26)
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|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Lightening and thunder reminds me od rambunctious children playing tricks on one another.
Come to Tampa, the lightning Capitol of the World. We're in the drought part of the season right now so it's rather quiet.
Love and blessings,
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Strong imagery in this poem. Very thought provoking, too! Great work here:) Sheila|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Agree with Tinks...this powerful and strong.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most powerful Karla!!
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Many thoughts to ponder, this almost has a mystical feel to it...just lovely Karla!
peace and love, Carole~
|Reviewed by Rafika Anderson
|What a powerful, emotional statement. Nicely done, Karla. Works well with your storm theme.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|You draw out many emotions with this heartfelt write and leave one to ponder on thoughts....
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...striking thoughts...with a rumble in this pen...and water of emotion from the creator of two.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Karla, this is hauntingly beautiful..
Much Peace, love, and light
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Or maybe wishing, pleading for them to just go to sleep and quit fighting... --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner
|A great write, rain can be symbolic for many reasons.|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|The rain has a calming effect upon me...thunder and lightning awaken my senses...and then I become one with the electricity in the air. Beautiful images you present, Karla
Love from California
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Powerful write thank you for sharing
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|seems so sad-i love the rain-|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Well, we are drowning in those tears here...;) Ed|
|Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
|We were always told that when there is thunder, the angels in heaven are bowling....
|Reviewed by Olita Williams
|What lovely imagery. Perhaps because I am a twin I can relate so well to your poem.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|This one has a dark, depressive feel to it; one feels the mother's pain as she grieves for her twins. Excellent, foreboding write; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Reviewed by R Beeman
|hmm, an exciting yet calm, collective voice i hear. love the analogy of the mother being rain and crying for her twins. i like this one and will hold onto it.