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Always the Rain
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, December 26, 2007
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Don't know where this came from ... and so, I write.

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman

Come. Come with me to the birthplace
of lightning and thunder, twins held in check
by forces beyond their control. They will not
emerge until conditions are exactly right - the first,
a bolt of energy pushes its way out, flying 'cross the
room; the second, darker one arrives with a voice that
threatens the walls surrounding it. And always, always, the
rain - the tears of a mother mourning the loss of her children...

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (12/26)

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Reviewed by Susan de Vegter	12/28/2007

Lightening and thunder reminds me od rambunctious children playing tricks on one another. Come to Tampa, the lightning Capitol of the World. We're in the drought part of the season right now so it's rather quiet. Love and blessings, Susan




Reviewed by Sheila Roy	12/28/2007

Strong imagery in this poem. Very thought provoking, too! Great work here:) Sheila




Reviewed by Felix Perry	12/27/2007

Agree with Tinks...this powerful and strong. Fee




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	12/27/2007

Most powerful Karla!! Love tinka




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	12/27/2007

Many thoughts to ponder, this almost has a mystical feel to it...just lovely Karla! peace and love, Carole~




Reviewed by Rafika Anderson	12/27/2007

What a powerful, emotional statement. Nicely done, Karla. Works well with your storm theme.




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	12/26/2007

You draw out many emotions with this heartfelt write and leave one to ponder on thoughts.... Be safe, Karen




Reviewed by John Leko	12/26/2007

...striking thoughts...with a rumble in this pen...and water of emotion from the creator of two. well done... John




Reviewed by Amber Moonstone	12/26/2007

Karla, this is hauntingly beautiful.. Much Peace, love, and light Amber "V"




Reviewed by Charlie	12/26/2007

Or maybe wishing, pleading for them to just go to sleep and quit fighting... --Charlie




Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner	12/26/2007

A great write, rain can be symbolic for many reasons.




Reviewed by Amor Sabor	12/26/2007

The rain has a calming effect upon me...thunder and lightning awaken my senses...and then I become one with the electricity in the air. Beautiful images you present, Karla Love from California Amor




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	12/26/2007

Powerful write thank you for sharing God Bless Michelle~




Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan	12/26/2007

seems so sad-i love the rain-




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	12/26/2007

Well, we are drowning in those tears here...;) Ed




Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill	12/26/2007

We were always told that when there is thunder, the angels in heaven are bowling.... Love, Becca~




Reviewed by Olita Williams	12/26/2007

What lovely imagery. Perhaps because I am a twin I can relate so well to your poem. Thank you.




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	12/26/2007

This one has a dark, depressive feel to it; one feels the mother's pain as she grieves for her twins. Excellent, foreboding write; brava! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :(




Reviewed by Walt Hardester	12/26/2007

Interesting. Walt




Reviewed by R Beeman	12/26/2007

hmm, an exciting yet calm, collective voice i hear. love the analogy of the mother being rain and crying for her twins. i like this one and will hold onto it. always, randy

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