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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/29/2007 |
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| naughty & nice! |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
12/29/2007 |
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...and keep your hands out of those pockets too!
You Rascal, you!!! |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
12/29/2007 |
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...why you bad boy!
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
12/29/2007 |
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| If you find her, send her my way, just don't tell Rene...;) Ed |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/29/2007 |
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Hahahahahaha...okay...no comment...just posting my poem with the same title here....I think it is a funny that will enrich yours!!
Naughty, naughty, naughty girl
Sorry I have been so naughty
Okay!!!
I deserve a good hiding
Be gentle...okay!!
I need to learn a lesson
But you know what?
You can teach me
And rather tell me why
You say I am naughty
No need to abort me
We can sort this out
Without a doubt
If you tell me why
You must just say it
I won't deny it
Knowing more about life
Does not means saying less
No information
No defense
To explore
Means I learn so much more
The more I know
Less the sorrow at the end
Be straight with me
And have faith in me
That means no mistakes
Will be made
You can trust me on that one
What will happen to me ?
If you don't teach me love
I need to know everything
Sorry!!!!
I will be good ...I guess
If you forgive me
If you don't teach me well
What lesson will that be huh?
More than a journey
To heartache and pain ?
Sorry for being naughty, naughty, naughty
Am I forgiven
Are you smiling?
Please be gentle
When your hand hit my bud
I love you so you know
Please tell me now
And I won't have to
Go next door
To explore
To know a little bit more
About whatever...lol!!
Wink...Love Tinky
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?AuthorID=11577&id=206985
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
12/28/2007 |
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Soooooooooo, that's why you didn't answer your phone last night --- lol
God bless you. Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
12/28/2007 |
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| <3 :) <3 {{PS: Happy New Year !!! xOx 'Pea' xOx}} |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill |
12/28/2007 |
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Hey hey, William. Sounds like you din't suffer through a boring night.
Great write. One just can't have enough naughtism. LOL
Love,
Becca~ |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
12/28/2007 |
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Naughty...But nice.
Since Santa has come and gone,
It's time to get naughty again. Nice write.
Wishing you and loved ones a Happy and Healthy New Year,
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
12/28/2007 |
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Hee, hee, how naughty was she?
Have a Prosperous 2008
Ron
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
12/28/2007 |
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William, I guess I can't hide anything from you!!! lol
Love this poem, I wish you luck in finding that "naughty girl"..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by R Beeman |
12/28/2007 |
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Hmm, sounds like naughty was really nice. I agree with Ann a welcomed thanks for being naughty is a gentleman thing to do.
always,
randy |
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| Reviewed by Ann Scarborough |
12/28/2007 |
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She may be a bit embarrassed if she was really very naughty! You'll hear from her, I'm sure. How wonderful that you want to thank her for being naughty!
Love,
annie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/28/2007 |
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Most delightful piece, William; very well written! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
*still smiling* |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
12/28/2007 |
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beautiful write very nicely written
And kind of Intriguing and sad
That she left without a word!
Excellent write!!
Wishing you and your family an abundance of blessings
Peace Love and Joy....for The New Year ....Morning Star
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
12/28/2007 |
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lol,, this is cute,, a bit funny,, and somewhat sad,,, :) :(
Hope you can find her to thank her,,,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
12/28/2007 |
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...great pen of one sought...found naught...recovered in ones heart and soul.
excellent William...
best wishes for the New Year...
John |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
12/28/2007 |
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And thank you...William, great write.
Peace,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
12/28/2007 |
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Intriguing write my friend...made me smile while also bringing a bit of sadness to my heart. I imagine that if I outlive my beloved that I would often dream of him holding me and loving me as he has during our twenty eight years of wedlock, and can only hope that he too would share this type of intimate dream of me if he surpasses me...a bond between two who truly love each other does stand the test of time, and continues through life cherished within our hearts, souls, dreams and thoughts. I don't know if I captured the heart of this write, but it spoke to my heart in this way...I pray that the new year finds you well and filled with peace and joy.
Blessings from the mountains of Ky.
Joyce B. |
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