|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|So true. We get so caught up in 'making a living' that we forget how to 'live'...
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|A heartfelt collaboration that flows smoothly. I will never understand people who ignore precious love for money. Beautiful write!
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|Well done and well worded. Makes my mind wonder when I think back on a situation like this whether the parties were just following a plan already set forth and truly had no other options. Lady J|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a most passionate and moving collab ... nice work ...|
|Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
|Oooooh, I come home to such beauty. Rose, Fee, this is so touching and reminiscent. And I love the style you two put together. Somehow, everything I've tucked away this week just isn't going to measure up. Well done. Love it.
Sweets and smiles
|Reviewed by Sheri Uy
|A sad one, so profoundly expressed that one cant help but remember and wonder at life's 'what-ifs'. But pain of loss and longings are somehow avenues where one can make something beautiful and worthwhile, like writing these meaningful verses. Well done, Fee and Rose! My very best to both of you.
|Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis
|You two do work well together, keep it up and yes there is a lot of what if's in the words as well. I have to agree with Dan Johnson
Love to you both sis and dear cuz,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Sad but beautifully done!!
Excellent collab U 2 !!
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Beautifully sad, poignant piece...|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|A nicely reminder about lifes 'what if's?'
|Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink
|I recently went through something similar to this and how true it is! Excellent write.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|So very sad, and probably very true, in many cases.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|And then...how I envy those that knew, if only once, what love was all about!!!!!!
Nice collaboration Rose, but watch for Fee's Newfouland's warm bath.
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|You two share the same passions, heartbeat and even pain. You give so many others a chance to open their hearts and try love again.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|There is so much truth in this emotional poem full of love and hurt,, You make a good team,,,,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Heartbreaking yet heartfelt write, Rose and Fee; brava! bravo! Love the collab; extremely well penned!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Momma never told me there would be days like this.
|Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)
|Oh, so very tender and bittersweet - thanks to both of you for this moment of bliss and tears.|
|Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner
|Very beautiful from two talents. Words that ring true for some, true love never dies even though hearts exist apart.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Fee and Rose,
Two beautiful pens collaborate to make a memorable poem: well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Thank you Felix as it is always a pleasure and an honour to have the opportunity to share words with you.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose