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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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All In A Day's Work
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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This morning's pillowy clouds inspired this one ...

Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman.


... clouds wrap the sun in
pillows of darkness,
trying to smother
morning before it
has a chance to take
first breath.  The light is
too strong, however -
it pushes against
the shoulders of its
assailant, tosses
it across the room ...
all in a day's work.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (1/3)
 



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Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Smothered sun on a morning going darker...
...and a goooooooood morning to you too!!!!!
Georg
Reviewed by Charlie
Beautiful work, but your last line's cliche. I think you should chuck it. "I'm all for chucking things," she says with a chuckle. --Chuck-Chuck
Reviewed by John Leko
...strong and bright words...cast in shades of gray...and redeemed in brilliance.
nice pen Karla...
John
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
so very powerful in its beauty
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Beautiful, how can anyone see that and not believe? It is a question I have been asking myself for a long time
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Outstanding my friend....the depths of your thoughts amaze me! Enjoyed this much! Well done...
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
You are at one with the elements, they saturate your thoughts . . . They perform . . . You write . . . Regarding, "But, a gigolo?" . . . Believe what you will my friend . . .
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Karla,
This is an amazing poem..just as your beautiful picture.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Yes beautiful Karla!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Beautifully visual...

love, Carole~
Reviewed by Tanisha Herrin
What a pretty picture and your words capture the beauty of the moment. Great piece and thanks for sharing.
Reviewed by William Bonilla
an a beautiful day it is
peace and love be with you

William
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Nice imagery, Karla. Just need some warmer temps now.
Love and {{{{hugs}}},
Leland
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Intensely visual, powerful, vivid, and moving work. Thanks, Karla.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
A portrait painted brilliant shades of red done in words of glory. Well done.

Fee
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Shine on.....
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Ain't nobody gonna argue with the sun: the Light will triumph, every time! LOL Very well penned; love the pic! Gorgeous! BRAVA, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
And what powerful work, indeed!
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