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Age of Puberty (Haiku)
by Sheri C. Uy

Thursday, January 03, 2008
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A few lines telling about the so called raging hormones of youth.


Clear serene waters
Hold a mystery within
Deep down in its bed


Secrets of the sea
Lying still beneath the tides
Waiting to be free!

(Written by: Sheri C. Uy 01/03/2008)

 
 
 
 

 
 

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Reviewed by Jon Willey 4/24/2010
Sheri, as the John Melenchamp(?) song proclaims, "someday soon, changes gonna be comin 'rond make us all women and men" -- as you elude to, "clear serene waters --hold a mystery within" -- much peace and love to you my friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by E. Richardson 3/3/2008
Sheri, these pieces are outstanding! Perfect in form, great imagery and metaphor.
Reviewed by Jerry Engler 1/24/2008
Very beautiful and well-done analogy. I liked it very much...Jerry
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana 1/13/2008
Shery, I joined a few month earlier than you. I decided that I can learn a lot from you especialy the haiku's. Very nice thak you for sharing. Emile
Reviewed by Morning Star 1/5/2008
Soothing and peaceful
The age of puberty sounds like a teenager
like the tides struggling to free out
Of puberty and forcing the teen
To adult hood
Beautifully written Haiku
Love Peace and Hugssss....Morning Star
Reviewed by jude forese 1/5/2008
nicely developed haiku ...
Reviewed by M. Rafferty 1/5/2008
Soothing and full of wonderful meanings...
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 1/5/2008
High tides, low tides, calm waters, raging waters....
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/4/2008
I do appreciate the metaphorical tone of these haiku. Well done, Sheri. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Jean Pike 1/4/2008
I don't know a lot about this poetry form, Sheri, but this has a nice, soothing feel to it. I enjoyed it.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 1/4/2008
Like the raging tides beating against a thick wall of rocks! Very descriptive and creative...

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by William Bonilla 1/4/2008
Beautiful writes both
most enjoyable kus
Peace & Love Be with you

William
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/4/2008
Gotta love it!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 1/4/2008
love them..
Have a happy day!
Ron
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/4/2008
Powerfully penned, Sheri.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 1/4/2008
Sheri this is excellent,, It portrays perfectly with a great understanding of a teenager going through the process of becoming an adult...
Love, Christine
Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/4/2008
I can see an expression of balance that you seem to suggest in this fine write that puberty and coming of age is also such a wonderfully romantic awakening of the senses. Enjoyed...

Fee
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 1/4/2008
You nailed that one my friend! Beautifully done my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/4/2008
Sheri,

The power of mysteries, of passion awakening, in perfect haiku form. Breathtaking!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 1/4/2008
Sheri,

Very well written my friend. As they say,"time and tides wait for no one." Pardon the pun but it flowed perfectly. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 1/4/2008

Beautiful... "Age of Puberty (Haiku)" has delivered a poetic bouquet.

I salute You, Poet.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 1/4/2008
Wonderful write, Sheri; brava! Seems that kids are hitting puberty younger and younger nowadays; that's scary!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)
Reviewed by T. Schwimmer 1/4/2008
You leave me breathless with this one, Sheri. The hidden red hot passions of youth. Well expressed in six wonderful lines!

Best wishes,
Tanya
Reviewed by Andrew Grover 1/4/2008
Great ku, Sheri. Exhilarating!

Yours,
AJ Grover
Reviewed by Regino Gonzales, Jr. 1/3/2008
"Secrets of the sea". What a subtle and artistic way to describe the emotions of a woman-to-be. Very nice my dear!

Sincerely,

Regino

Reviewed by E. Richardson 1/3/2008
Outstanding haiku, Sheri. The human feelings do hold these kind of intense emotions especially during the teen-age years. Well done!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/3/2008
Superb haiku! Thanks for sharing!

ET



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