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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
1/16/2008 |
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You are very right in what you say here. My favorite line is,
"I am the sum of my experiences
I have made my choices"
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
1/13/2008 |
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I wrote something similar several years ago called Still Me, I wrote it after reading Christopher Reeves book with the same title, again Kathy you surpass yourself
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
1/12/2008 |
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| I find warmth, caring, wanting to share, and a wonderful poet. Much enjoyed. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
1/12/2008 |
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I look within YOUR words sweet Kathy! and it there that I do find you!
YOur souls feelings! within...
To really OPEN UP, is what it's all about and you have figured that one out!
Our experiences teach us through our times left on earth!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
1/10/2008 |
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Sweet photograph~As we journey through life, all the trials and errors of our ways make us who we are, and who we are yet to become....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/10/2008 |
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Okies, can you ask the Dr to send me an xray, then I'll have a good look inside you....
RaeLynn is spot on... |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
1/10/2008 |
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...the mountains you have climbed...will be seen in your eyes...there are those who will notice...
honest and well penned Kathy...
John |
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| Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller |
1/9/2008 |
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For people to see what is inside, we must open up. Here on the den I think we feel for each other because, mostly, we only see the inside. I'm lucky to have both sides at my access. You're beautiful inside and out.
Love ya--RaeLynn |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/9/2008 |
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| i think it's crucial to see into a person as they see themselves ... takes opening oneself ... |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
1/9/2008 |
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A profound write indeed...your write allows one to see a deep, intelligent, caring, sensitive and compassionate person...a great reflection, and personal write...you penned it well!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
1/9/2008 |
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Kathy I don't have to look too far to see in your heart the love and understanding for others. You are a very special person. Thank you for your words.
newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
1/9/2008 |
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| I love this, Karen. Thank God that you truly know YOURSELF - what a gift! In my rummage bag this evening, it was a toss-up between The Seal and another poem berueing the fact that I'm NOT really known - least of all to myself - which I nearly posted instead... So, perhaps another time. But this is strong and self-confident both in execution and tone, and I deeply applaud you! Love Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/9/2008 |
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This is very well done and to reflect so deeply on our lifes and our attitudes and come up with the answers you have is very gratifying. You are a great woman and one with a true big heart.
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Fee |
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| Reviewed by larry linville |
1/9/2008 |
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When I first looked at your picture, that white hat and thoughtful look caught my attention. After reading your writings, I'm attracted to the person inside.
Larry |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
1/9/2008 |
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I see a mountain which I will never climb, a flower that I will never get, a promise that wouldn't crystalize, a beauty that will never be inside the arms of the beast...and a soul, so pure, that the mud of my world yearns for a drop of it to wash it of its sins.
Before looking inside you I didn't believe...now I do.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
1/9/2008 |
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| I understand, but at first glance it is difficult to look inside . . . Outward apperances count also . . . To some that is ALL that counts and that is sad . . . |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
1/9/2008 |
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Kathy,
I see the strength and the person that I wish I could be. Many people come and go in our lifetime. Some affect us deeply and others not. You have the manner and the personality that is so easy to love. My wife is just like you, a beautiful person inside and out. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/9/2008 |
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Kathy~
I see you as a beautiful person who has had many a hard time in her life. Keep on writing; it will help you heal in the long run; that's why I write. Thank GOD you have Steve in your life, to help you during your life's journey; many people (including myself) aren't that fortunate! Very well penned; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/9/2008 |
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| The heart is what keeps us alive and the love that is in it is what makes us so special to God. Your poem is truly an inspiration for all of us to ponder, to look beyond the superficial exterior and find the gold that is within each and has made us what we are. |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
1/8/2008 |
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Dear Kathy, it is not hard to find what I see. The truth is I see your heart and your lovely soul.
The same question was asked by Jesus, when he went with his diciples in row boat. When they were surrounded by water, he asked them what do you see? Then every diciple answered differently and their were all right but no one was able to tell what he hoped that would already be able to see. Wery nice and well done, you are great, best regards to you and your husband Emile |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
1/8/2008 |
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You are very correct Kathy, the real you and or me or us is within the depth of our interior heart and soul...the exterior is just the covering of the pie...
nice work... |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
1/8/2008 |
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what is within is what shines out,,,,Blessings
Love, Christine |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
1/8/2008 |
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I always want to see the value of a person from the inside out. The package isn't much but window dressing anyway.
Awesome poetry.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/8/2008 |
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Kathy,
I see loveliness in personality and in verse. Don't worry about outer appearances: God doesn't, Steve doesn't. :) Excellent introspective write, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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