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Head Changes
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Wednesday, January 09, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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From the womb to the tomb.

Born into this world,
a baby boy or girl.
Not knowing,
but mentally showing.
showing insecurity,
because of young age immaturity.

The stories start to unfold,
but who told?
No one has to tell,
the head changes will
make them yell.
Scream out all type insanity,
especially after a loss of vanity.

Changes in the head,
can put everyone in the red,
even kill them dead.
Some don't make the ride,
eventually head changes
make them committ suicide,



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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 1/9/2008

Don't worry: we all have moments of rage and want to express it, but we're afraid to. You aren't. That's what I like about your writing. I'm religious, and agree, the world is a mucked up place. (See? Want to type the F word, but can't LOL) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 1/9/2008
Raw and bare-boned writing, Gem. I am (semi) religious, but I am not offended by your words. Never have been, never will be. I love how you write. You aren't afraid to speak from your mind, your heart; that shows that you are human, and I admire that. You've got guts, man! Very well done; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

I've written some pretty raw stuff myself, but I writes how they come to me. Sometimes it's mean and ugly. :)
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 1/9/2008
good raw writing
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