|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|HMMMMM, JUST THINKING...THIS IS ONE OF THE THINGS THAT MAKES SOLDIERS...SOLDIERS! A MOST PROFOUND WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|I think you have said more than what you write. Yet, it has given me pause to think about some of my past and what went astray.
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|YES! I call it "relate" feeling that same deep constant feeling!
Wonderful poem written!Feels like a song!
I am happy you are back! in our open arms Georg!
I hope you enjoyed being at the places your presense was welcomed in!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
Find your Inner Peace! Keep in close to you my friend!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|The inner turmoil of two walking separate paths can only hurt yet it can also bring inner peace and tranquility as time passes along. Sometimes that is the way it has to be, but the pain lingers on....
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A beautifully written piece Georg
peace be with you brother
Did I say Wecome back ????
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Send it blank, saying, this is all I have to say...
Most bitter/sweet, ole chap...
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Beautifully written for the topic it covers, with such words it has to lessen the pain, yet it will be there,no matter what is said.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Perhaps this is a sad commentary on the way relationships often end but it is truthfully honest. Thank you, Georg. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|A salutation that surely is as hard to begin with as "yours truly" at the other end. Good write. Lady J|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Well written and well espressed...love in blooming or in dying is always dramatic and your poem gives voice to that drama.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Once bitten twice shy...once love died and blown away by the wind...nothing can put that together again.....no Humpty Dumpty quick fixed!!
Thanks for sharing !!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|A fork in the trail,,different directions,,,,thinking back,,,, stepping forward. Georg, your words flow of sadness and beauty.
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Beautifully written...love always, holly|
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|I pictured this poor guy, stunned with the news, but quickly came to his senses after thinking about the "Mess Hall Musing's Party" he went to last night and picked the last petal from the Daisy, saying, "She loves me not!'
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Poignant point well made.|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...how does one seal the closure of this letter...when there is no longer sweetness in the lip...to hold the final thoughts within the envelope.
sensitively and beautifully expressed George...
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Sad write, Georg; powerfully penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(
|Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
|The truth hurts. You have written this well. You've captured the despair. Eileen|
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|The ones I got always started with Dear Bastard.
But then I have written a few of those myself. Somehow it balances out.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Poignancy runs like tears through this pen...excellently expressed. The ultimate "Dear John" letter...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|My husband witnessed another soldier's suicide resulting from just such a letter. So sad Georg and so well penned.|
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|You my friend carry much pain, when love is cast away cheaply, it hurts twice as much, and if it was deeply felt can hurt forever. Had it been normal times, not war, you might have found some refuge, but being in the wilderness without an oasis and a drink of love to find anywhere you have been scarred a very deep wound of war! Bless you my friend! Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I canít start this letter with a Dear:
because I donít feel anymore that way.
So very, very sad, my brother.