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by Georg E Mateos
Friday, January 11, 2008
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Sometimes what you have to say will not go out from the tip of your tongue or from the tip of your quill.
Some words chokes one more than other, and then, they are those never spoken but that you understood were for you.


This one was inspired by Founding True Love
by Jasmin Horst E.P. Seiler





I canít start this letter with a Dear:
because I donít feel anymore that way,
we were two roads briefly crossing and
now we are going, how can I sayÖ
in different directions, leading hearts
taking us not back to our yesterday.

Before, this pages were of pristine white,
words make them so dirty to appear may
that not after scribbling LOVE we can
erase that blot of ink for what I didnít felt,
please, if you like me, donít feel the same,
donít let your heart be filled with contempt.

This will be just like a postcard in brevity,
maybe like receiving a knife you will take,
that what we had is there no more for me
wasnít courageous enough to personally tell,
because you are the one good with words
I only are good as I can make my pretty face.

The privilege to pick and choose is feminine,
la donna e mobile, Giuseppe Verdy once said,
it wasnít youÖor me, it was the damn absence,
get over me soldier, another hill you can conquer,
that war wouldnít last forever you will be back
and into the arms of a new loving Jezebel.

I canít start this letter with a Dear:
because I donít feel anymore that way.







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Reviewed by JMS Bell
HMMMMM, JUST THINKING...THIS IS ONE OF THE THINGS THAT MAKES SOLDIERS...SOLDIERS! A MOST PROFOUND WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
I think you have said more than what you write. Yet, it has given me pause to think about some of my past and what went astray.

God bless you. Kathy
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
YES! I call it "relate" feeling that same deep constant feeling!
Wonderful poem written!Feels like a song!
I am happy you are back! in our open arms Georg!
I hope you enjoyed being at the places your presense was welcomed in!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!
Find your Inner Peace! Keep in close to you my friend!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
The inner turmoil of two walking separate paths can only hurt yet it can also bring inner peace and tranquility as time passes along. Sometimes that is the way it has to be, but the pain lingers on....

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by William Bonilla
A beautifully written piece Georg
enjoyed reading
peace be with you brother
Did I say Wecome back ????

William
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Send it blank, saying, this is all I have to say...
Most bitter/sweet, ole chap...
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Beautifully written for the topic it covers, with such words it has to lessen the pain, yet it will be there,no matter what is said.

ET
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Perhaps this is a sad commentary on the way relationships often end but it is truthfully honest. Thank you, Georg. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
A salutation that surely is as hard to begin with as "yours truly" at the other end. Good write. Lady J
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Well written and well espressed...love in blooming or in dying is always dramatic and your poem gives voice to that drama.

Fee
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Once bitten twice shy...once love died and blown away by the wind...nothing can put that together again.....no Humpty Dumpty quick fixed!!

Thanks for sharing !!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
A fork in the trail,,different directions,,,,thinking back,,,, stepping forward. Georg, your words flow of sadness and beauty.
Christine
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Beautifully written...love always, holly
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
I pictured this poor guy, stunned with the news, but quickly came to his senses after thinking about the "Mess Hall Musing's Party" he went to last night and picked the last petal from the Daisy, saying, "She loves me not!'
Seeyabetch!
LOL!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Reviewed by George Carroll
Poignant point well made.
Reviewed by John Leko
...how does one seal the closure of this letter...when there is no longer sweetness in the lip...to hold the final thoughts within the envelope.
sensitively and beautifully expressed George...
John
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Sad write, Georg; powerfully penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(
Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
The truth hurts. You have written this well. You've captured the despair. Eileen
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
The ones I got always started with Dear Bastard.
But then I have written a few of those myself. Somehow it balances out.

Walt
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
(((Georg))),

Poignancy runs like tears through this pen...excellently expressed. The ultimate "Dear John" letter...

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
My husband witnessed another soldier's suicide resulting from just such a letter. So sad Georg and so well penned.
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
You my friend carry much pain, when love is cast away cheaply, it hurts twice as much, and if it was deeply felt can hurt forever. Had it been normal times, not war, you might have found some refuge, but being in the wilderness without an oasis and a drink of love to find anywhere you have been scarred a very deep wound of war! Bless you my friend! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
I canít start this letter with a Dear:
because I donít feel anymore that way.

So very, very sad, my brother.
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