Affectus
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Friday, January 11, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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All day I was feeling ok, now I'm in pain. I feel better out working, come home to relax everything starts to pain me. Sometime I can hardly sleep. |
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Bad things can make us sad,
get us all mad,
especially after we been had.
Good things can make us feel good,
put us in a joyous mood.
The minimum results,
can cause personal pain and insults.
The maximum may endanger our health,
maybe even cause death.
We all should have a good parachute,
especially when things become destitute.
Even with a good chute,
we can still get the boot,
either we do or don't give a hoot.
Twenty-four seven,
we could end up in hell or heaven.
Life has no guarantee,
nothing in this world comes free.
Don't waste the next minute,
another second,
you might not be in it.
OnepoetGem
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
1/12/2008 |
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| i am so soory you are hurting--a good write here |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
1/12/2008 |
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| I hear you with regards the pain part...I could work all day not feeling any pain, but let me get home and try to relax, then the pain starts in...good write as always...ed |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
1/12/2008 |
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| That's the truth if ever I heard it. Plain, simple truth, love Holly |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/12/2008 |
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Hope you feel better, Gem; hang in there! I'll say a prayer for you; hope you are okay!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Great write yet again! |
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