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Jupiter Falls
by Amor Sabor
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*Art: digital graphic "Blueberry Night" by Amor Sabor

“Jupiter Falls”

Her hips transferred the energy of her power
triangulated upwards towards her navel
as Jupiter falls swiftly below the horizon
of a grapefruit sunset between her thighs
she swivels barely a heartbeat away
while her feminine torso twists and turns
and her omnipresent breasts hover free
suspended above by invisible threads
mesmerizing with such beautiful precision
reaching into me like pomegranate roots
penetrating the framework of my aching
with the tentacles of her untainted love
a liquid paragraph of sweet sensual sighs
issues forth from her soft half parted lips
saturating the hollows of my waiting flesh
with the brilliant hues of sacred moons
where I am awakened by her restless tides
and the throbbing of an incessant heart
as she turns the pages of pure ecstasy
with the vibrations of her quivering thighs

We stand midstream in the river Nile
where this love in the ripples was born
under magenta skies and a crescent moon
existent prematurely above our heads
our hands palm to palm pressed firmly
facing each other in the patient light
an aura surrounds the passion of our bodies
the atoms of our energy revive in a mist
through the magic of sweet love and lust
in the restless hunger that resides within
she sees me through dark chrome shadows
where I melt contentedly in her radiance
like a pocket watch upon the frozen ledge
springing forth in the dawn of her smile
transformed in the white light of a kiss
as our skin sloughs off in the heat of love
and the ancients stand in our shadows
content in the revised hunger of our eyes

We reflect the destiny of our obsessions
wrapped up in the heat of dear mother earth
that envelops us in the art of our intimacy
painting our pleasures in unbridled exchanges
inside each other in the thrusts of salvation
waking to the whispers of the soft falling rain
while the muted flickering candles resign
and the comfort of each other’s warmth resides
embraced fully through eternity’s gilded gates
the obverse and inverse melded in the passion
elevated with the fury of embers in the wind
and Jupiter falls into our hearts and souls
where it splashes in the aftermath of lust
and is reborn in the pursuit of our elation
as it strikes the ocean of dream and desire
enveloping us with bright stars and galaxies
before we fall asleep in each other’s arms

© 2008 Amor Sabor

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Reviewed by John Flanagan
This is superb writing, Amor, with a natural fluency without punctuation and with minimal use of 'and'...that is so hard to achieve,
and the images and their range and impact are simply top drawer.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
good one, i like this
Reviewed by Mimi Malaika
You really are amazing. I love reading your work. You always inspire me to want to write more. Keep it up!!
Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
I cannot find the words to express my admiration for your talent, Amor. To repeat Phyllis, W O W!!!!
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
W O W ! Got me tongue-tied !! Thank you so much for posting this, Amor. If your name means love, you are well-named indeed!

Have to say it again: W O W !!


Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
As artistic and erotic as always Amor, truly beautiful.
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Awesome, my friend! Enjoyed very much!
Reviewed by A PAX
speechless......the big bang theory all cosmic and lusty......tender and human....applause
you sure can write!!!!
pax A
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
Ah yes!
I'm never disappointed when I visit your Den!
Indeed a man for all seasons..
Thank you for being YOU thus gifting us all with your mind, heart and soul!
Exquisite piece! ( am saving it)

Vesna :)
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
A seductive, passionate, and cleverly written poem with powerful imagery...well done!
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Outstanding-ly HOT! Phew! Is it me, or did "Jupiter Falls" misalign me? :)

It flows like lava from a volcano!
So enjoyed!
Love and Peace~
Reviewed by Morning Star
Stunning seductive poetic view of thoughts!!
Sweet passion and Oh so romantic!!
A piece that lives the reader absolutely breathless
Beautifully written poem and love the title
Jupiter Falls!!
Peace Love And hugssss to you....Morning Star
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
A Classic piece of art and poem....well done!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink
Wow - what a beautiful write and image. You are truly gifted. Look forward to reading you more.

Sanja xo
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
I'm always astonished by how creatively you approach imagery. So many exceptional and unique descriptions in this poem. You mix nature and romance perfectly!
Reviewed by Bella Nye
I am in awe of your talent! This piece is exquisite!

Thank you for welcoming me to Authors Den, Amor. And I WILL deliver! I promise...

Reviewed by Charlie
Okay, Don Juan. I'm blushing! --Charlie
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
Very romantic indeed!!!!! Great artwork too!!! Enjoyed both!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
WOW! I FELL and I can't get up - I think I forgot how to type, I kept hitting the wrong keys LOL
How long did it take you to draw ALL this out of you Amor?
I am truly amazed at your mind, heart, soul, spirits depth!
This is sure a gem of a treasure I will forever savor!
I'm tongue-tied! Don't laugh, I'm serious and spelling all wrong, I want to re-read this again, your style is eloquent, beyond feeling, words are trippy and I love knowing I can share these feelings too~ YOu know Amor, It's not only finding the words in your mind but it's placement too and you have no problems there! The Best part - Falling asleep in eachothers arms! Ahhh.... The beauty of Skin! ETc.
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!
Write ON!
Reviewed by Saberi Roy
your poetry is like a vortex, it sucks in with the first's like poetry entering the mind rather than the mind entering poetry....great
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
You make romance an endless adventure..
Stay safe Amor
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Oh my this is a masterpiece,, simply beautiful!
Blessings, Christine
Reviewed by jude forese
flows effortlessly, Amor ...
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Amor, every word throbs with passion leaving me
breathless and thankful for the gift of your poetry,
which always gives much pleasure!.luv the art ,too.Both Magnifico!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Wonderfully picturesque photograph! You have a way of drawing the reading right in, just fantastic....

Be safe,
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
love the imagination, and Jupiter is one of my favorite planets..perfect to expand the mind :)
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
I'm not certain how you are able to write the way you do with no periods and comas and get away with it! Your poem glides along as if floating freely in a very unquie kind of way, excellent, love Holly
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Wow there you've done it again, you continue to take us in this world of your's and we enjoy it, keep it coming and we'll keep reading Amor.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Amor, as an astrologer, I was attracted to your title first of all. Knowing your style, I anticipated the sensuality of the writing and the intense use of imagery to paint rich pictures in the mind of the reader. However, the painting was an extraordinary touch. Some of the lines defy logic, but have an overwhelming appeal, such as "I melt contentedly in her radiance like a pocket watch upon the frozen ledge springing forth in the dawn of her smile..." Lovely, indeed.
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Enjoyed this seductive and creative presentation along with colorful and glowing edges of "Blueberry Night" artwork. Continued blessings and enlightenment to you.

All the best as always,

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
You have done well Fantasy Merchant! You have placed yore Den Groupies happily in yore bed! It was a truly delightful experience! SC
Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
flavour of love -absolutely beauti....*faints*
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Between stream of consciousness that leaves one breathless and modern mythological tale... dreamlike; this is my impression when I read your poem. Beautifully chosen title.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Oh my,how beautiful this is darlin,stay safe and well...Hugsssss
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Such lines--such passion--such--I'm breathless!!!!!!!!!! Amor, few can get me stirred up like you--indeed. Well done! Love the image, too.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *gaspgaspgasp*
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Words cannot describe the feelings that this piece ignites..The photo and your amazing imagery brings me to my knees to praise the heavens for reading such an epic piece of work..Oh my, I guess I really liked this poem. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with the world.
Peace, love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Stunning imagery, Amor; superb writing! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
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