by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Wednesday, January 16, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I love real sugar, don't give me no phony sweets.
throw it out the window.
Along with the other phony sweets,
give me the real thing in my treats.
It's no maybe,
I love you sweet baby.
Surely you do care,
while others only sit back and stare.
Under your covers,
it's not all about us lovers.
Nor is it about being rich in wealth,
it's about keeping the body in good health.
Too much of the real thing will kill,
but not enough of you is no thrill.
Between the two,
not even the real thing is as sweet as you.
It's no fun with an empty sugar bag,
llfe is surely a bore and a drag.
Bring back my true sweet,
bring her back tooooo me,
I need my sweet to make my life complete.
Sugar in the morning,
sugar in the evening,
sugar at super time,
let our sweet, sweet love sublime.
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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I think I got IT!!! YOUR Secret to writing Sweetie! A 2 sentence winner each time, don't know what I mean, I will try it sometime! This one spoke right to me!
About Suger, it's the AFTER TASTE, YUKkkk! :(
Now, bring on the REAL Sweets! is the sugar I seek!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
Stay Positive! BiG Hugs to ya'!
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Well,this is so sweet ya brought tears to my eyes..yes I agree I can't stand phony either but I surely do love the sweetness you have written here,a true and wonderful man you are,don't ever forget that darlin..Hugssssssssss and by the way Thank you so much for the sweetness you have showed me...
Chanti Lace xoxo
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Why Grady, What a sweet write!
I enjoyed this one
Know what you meen Pal
Notining like the real Mccoy
I know I am Diabetic
even that can't replace my true Honey
Peace be with you