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| Reviewed by Charlie |
1/22/2008 |
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You hear all about Haikus in school, and every poet has to try his/her hand at them, but I like Tankas better. I'm glad you wrote this.
For anyone who doesn't know: The tanka is a Japanese form, and is, essentially, an extended Haiku. Because of that, quite often the haiku part is separated from the last two lines, so it goes Haiku--Couplet (all unrhymed). There is also a form of Tanka that's called Waka, where the couplet part is about a different subject than the haiku part.
And when two people write a tanka together: One writes the haiku, the other a couplet response, then that is called a Renga, and it is very fun to write a chain of them. A Renga chain would be fun to do in this den. --Charlie
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
1/21/2008 |
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All the beauty of nature wrapped up so snuggly with each and every snowflake as it cascades, sparkling until it lands gently....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
1/21/2008 |
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A soft and tender write full of heart and soul...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Matthew Wright |
1/21/2008 |
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| This is the kind of poem to come home to and read after a hard day at the office. I just did, and makes me feel better. I love the words. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/21/2008 |
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A very lovely piece.
PS I think 'Tanka' is a wonderful name for a dog, too - especially a very big one! |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
1/20/2008 |
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I've never dabbled in the formats
This write is great
stay safe
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
1/20/2008 |
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| very nice--i loved your blog! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/20/2008 |
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...perfect rest!!!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful, Rebecca.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Learning 'bout this form, meself. Addicting, yes? |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/20/2008 |
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| You aced this format. |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
1/20/2008 |
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Right on [target]! You relay this most beautifully.
God bless you. Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Jennifer Butler |
1/20/2008 |
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| A lovely poem here. Thank you for sharing it. |
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| Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels |
1/20/2008 |
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| I enjoyed your poem today! Help keep poetry alive!!! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
1/20/2008 |
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| Aw drat!!! Everybody seems to be taken with tanka these days. I tried my hand at it about a year or so ago, maybe I'll try it again . . . Although I don't think I will ever be able to match what you have done here . . . Clever and inspiring . . . |
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| Reviewed by ellen george |
1/20/2008 |
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This is such a talented lady - in response to her light hearted blog about Tanka poetry, she creates a wonderful work that captures the beauty and spirit of the medium. Ms. Lerwill is an amazing writer. She should think about publishing a book of her magnificent poetry.
ellen |
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