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|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Good for you Sanja, to transport yourself into the personna of another character and make poem take on the life of that personna isn't always easy. This write is smooth and the hint of cheating does't come out till the very end. Only suggestion is to write out 2 though in the last line
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wow last night at 2 would certainly anger my other half and be cause for questioning for sure. Your post leave me with questions, thank you for sharing Sanja.
Newfie Hugs, Rose