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Dancing Pages by Sanja Dayslink Friday, January 25, 2008 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Nothing personal. Just my words and I at it again.

The thoughts that I produced this morning As I read your words to me How could you think the way you do What ever came over me I stirred and I stuttered Not knowing what to do The pages stared and punched What an inconsiderate bunch I did what I could Why do you think of me so I did nothing to you For you to be that cruel Could I make it any clearer The words danced round This wasn�t in my stars How did we get this far Only hatred and guilt Is in my blood I didn�t know that he knew Where I was last night at two. �

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Reviewed by Felix Perry	1/27/2008

Good for you Sanja, to transport yourself into the personna of another character and make poem take on the life of that personna isn't always easy. This write is smooth and the hint of cheating does't come out till the very end. Only suggestion is to write out 2 though in the last line Fee




Reviewed by Rose Rideout	1/26/2008

Wow last night at 2 would certainly anger my other half and be cause for questioning for sure. Your post leave me with questions, thank you for sharing Sanja. Newfie Hugs, Rose