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Sanja Dayslink

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Dancing Pages
by Sanja Dayslink
Friday, January 25, 2008
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Nothing personal. Just my words and I at it again.


The thoughts that I produced this morning
As I read your words to me
How could you think the way you do
What ever came over me

I stirred and I stuttered
Not knowing what to do
The pages stared and punched
What an inconsiderate bunch

I did what I could
Why do you think of me so
I did nothing to you
For you to be that cruel

Could I make it any clearer
The words danced round
This wasnít in my stars
How did we get this far

Only hatred and guilt
Is in my blood
I didnít know that he knew
Where I was last night at two.

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Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/27/2008
Good for you Sanja, to transport yourself into the personna of another character and make poem take on the life of that personna isn't always easy. This write is smooth and the hint of cheating does't come out till the very end. Only suggestion is to write out 2 though in the last line

Fee
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 1/26/2008
Wow last night at 2 would certainly anger my other half and be cause for questioning for sure. Your post leave me with questions, thank you for sharing Sanja.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
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