|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Hey, you're cool. Dare I ask, how do you fly high enough to see an aquamarine submarine and what is it doing in the sky? Strange UFO!
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|You have something...you always rhyme your last words...I just wonder if you read the poems out loud if you would change anything...you know...how it sounds more than rhyming the last words...then again, I like your style it is very entertaining. It's all good...from the den's MR EDster...HUGS|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Ed, what ever you wrote you made me float, funny stuff man and the picture. I got a good laugh out of this right from the start|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|YOu write your mind...and it's good!!
|Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
|I like your poetry! An aquamarine submarine, hmmm. Better take Rufuz for that walk if he is sending email to PeeWee Ed's mutts. Don't worry about the rest. It will take care of itself.
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Aquamarine submarine would have to be captained by a woman, out to make a statement.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|You funny that's cause
RUFUZ CAN TEACH YOU IN DOGGIE LANGUE
woof woof bark ark woof snoof bark woof
FoRGET IT, rUFUZ SaID
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Sounds like you're really flyin, Bro! You best come down, and take Rufie for a walk; he really has to pee! (He sent my mutts an e-mail.)|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|lill' brither, if you ain't a poet an' I believed yo'was...a SOB must had put som'tin' to confuse my brain on my morning cereal!!!!!!!!
brain?...should I had one?
Ed the Elder
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|Enjoyed your beatles trip.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Aha,now you're in my territory!;-)
Don't be your own critic or you'll never write;-)
listen to the other poets,we like you!
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|We all live in a yellow submarine...aquamarine? Hmmmmm
That sub must be somewhere in the Gulf!
You're a funny man Ed!
love and blessings!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Writes 'em as you gets 'em. :) I'll read any and all, 'k? I like yellow submarines (thanks, now got the tune stuck in me head LOL). Have never seen an aquamarine one, bet that's cool!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. Howdy to Rene and Rufuz, 'k?