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Geographic Thoughts Held against my will in Death Valley, I find myself holding my breath at the unexpected beauty that peeks from a distance. Can't be safe, but it is high enough for Joshua trees to raise their arms. Told a waterfall 18-feet high tickles. Ferns have lain moss to cushion its rock-torn feet. Still in Death Valley. A horror stone avoids. A lake that was all set to fill ended up having to settle for salt-crusted soil looks hard as rock. Try it. Walk out a ways. Suck you like a lollipop. Hear-tell of a feller the muck buried. Still standin, 'e was. Makes you mad. Look through the swirls of dust. an' grit. See the crumpled rugs look like giants ordered? Hop-skip-'n'-a jump to an oasis ain' cookin' at 1:20 Fahrenheit. Sun's been known to up the ante to 136. Still, if will pull yourself up, knock the gunk off your boots and tighten what's left of the straps on your pack, you can cross 'er. Got the mettle, 'at is. Me? Just have to close the cover of a magazine that is, as it ought to be, the color of sun stirred into gold..
(c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2008
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
2/8/2008 |
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| Beautiful imagery which evokes feelings of desperation but strength also. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Sheri Uy |
2/7/2008 |
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Wonderful insights, Pea. Uniquely expressed.
Love,
Sheri |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/5/2008 |
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Great thoughts..
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) |
2/4/2008 |
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| Uniquely arranged thoughts. Well penned in a 'natural voice' way! |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
2/3/2008 |
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I have enjoyed the reading of "Geographic Thoughts".
Keep posting Your creations.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
2/3/2008 |
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I hiked out of the Canyon during late August...The air you breathe is dirt but the beauty cleanses your senses! I knock some gunk off my boots that trip!
You brought me back! :)
...and THANKS for that! I love your pen!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/3/2008 |
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Excellent imagery and verse, Pea; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/3/2008 |
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(((Pea))),
Even Death Valley has its beauty--a reminder to be grateful for what we have? Starkly imaged wonderment, your words.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/3/2008 |
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| your write sure was in stark contrast to our huge pile-up of snow here in northern Utah-- |
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