by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Saturday, February 16, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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It's nice to get honorable attention,
but not in this den of retention. It's been this way for years, but it's not apart of my fears.
Thanks Labelle for the honorable mention,
since then I've hardly got any attention.
Well to be honest,
hardly got any before,
now the jealousy is really knocking on my door.
Anyway I'm low profile,
but every now and then I do enjoy a smile.
Not too long ago,
a fellow den member
told me something I didn't know.
Probably never would have known,
about a fellow den member picking the bone.
I was refered to as this big nigger,
made me want to reach for my trigger,
but I'm smarter than this I figure.
For the non hating wiser,
I try to be a loving compromiser.
But this den is a hateful silly place,
people call you nigger behind your face,
I've had my share of stupid jealous fights,
and I've stood up for my rights.
Right to write,
I pay to use this site.
Right to exist,
with all the good and bad in my mist.
I try to be an honorable man,
but I'll get in your evil plan,
if I have too,
knock you on your can.
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|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Hatemongers are horribly insecure individuals. They use labels because they don't have the intelligence to articulate a cohesive thought. I've only recently come to know you through your poetry, and I would be really sad if you stopped writing. Keep writing and posting, here. You are good for my heart and soul.
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...your creative thoughts and words... are most appreciated pen...may the brighter lights shine in your den...
shine on OnePoetGem...
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Grady. Who cares what you look like - we are all brothers and sisters of the pen, we all write in the same color. :) I love how you write, even though I don't always stop in and review, I do read, 'cause I like what you have to say.
Keep writing, I'll keep reading/reviewing when I can!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Anyone who calls you the N word has NO business being on this site! Sad when the AD bigwigs can't do anything to stop this madness; it's crazy! I will keep you in my prayers; you keep writing! You have as much right to be here as anyone else; I need to see/read your words!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Anyone who calls you that is stupid; they don't know any better! I feel sorry for them!
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Like I always have told you HELL with those idiots sweet sweet man,their just jealous because your the man darlin..Hugssss
Chanti Lace xoxo
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|WHAT! I had no idea Grady, Oh My God- Which is all our God!
I know you have a heart of stone, meaning strong and determined! but you also have a heart of sensitivity that keeps on shining!
NEVER Leave, for those people are filled with Jealousy!
I love how your words sing songs to my ears, I have been quite busy dear, but Ooooooooh, How I have missed YOU!
I will stay awhile in your quaint cozy honest den, and SEE and FEEL where your heart has been.
I've been heartbroken, and my recent poems show it. I need to feel a lift and I know the place to get it!
Love you Grady!
Your heart is always ready!
Give it like you do
To those who try to hurt you
In your coy and honest way
YOu share what you need to say~!
I appreciate that in YOU
and You better know I am being TRUE!
Color by the way, is in the crayon box!
Much love and Warmer Blessings and Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
Grady, I can kind of feel where your heart is, but come to my den and leave some sunshine if you have any left... I miss it...
Write On My friend!Forever till our end!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Since I've joined AD, I've been amazed at how truly hateful a place it can be. I had hoped that writers would be above all of that, but I was sadly mistaken.
Don't Let the Hate Mongers get you down, my friend. I think they will always be among us, and the more attention we give them, the more they revel in their own slime.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Whoever called you that is dispicable. You are a beautiful person Grady, wouldn't matter what color you are, love knows no color. Shame on anyone that is ignoring you because you got a little appreciation and attention.|