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by Cryssa C
Thursday, February 21, 2008
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A Waltz Wave Poem (This form, named for Leo Waltz, the Web Manager of Sol Magazine, is a one-stanza titled poem, with nineteen lines; each line has a set number of syllables.
Pattern: 1, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 4, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 1)
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The
music
of
your love
reverbrates
in my
heart,
and sends
an echo
back to you, to
fill corners
of our
lives
with the
sweetest of
refrains
and
softest
rain
Authors Note: Yes, Charlie, I know... I misspelled reverberates, but I did it on purpose. I could only have three syllables in that line so I cheated and stole a vowel. (My love won't mind... )
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| Reviewed by 000 000 |
12/3/2008 |
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I like the words, the form and the message.
CarolHawks |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
3/11/2008 |
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| This is beautiful |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
3/8/2008 |
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| The words and 'shape' of this poem are simply lovely..Love, Diana. |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
3/4/2008 |
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The syncapation of this form is beautiful. I read it out loud to get the full impact. AWESOME!
God bless you. Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
2/24/2008 |
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Leo Waltz? I think we can all dance to this poem. You fill the corners of our lives and everything becomes round, warm, soft.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
2/23/2008 |
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| A beautiful write. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/22/2008 |
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Stunning elegance that moves across the page, into the reader's soul - beautiful, Cryssa.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
2/22/2008 |
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| Dear Cryssa, The poem is beautiful so is its meaning. Love Emile |
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| Reviewed by l West (Reader) |
2/22/2008 |
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| Cryssa, this is just LOVERLY! |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
2/22/2008 |
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| Romantic, beautiful words!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Susan Phillips |
2/22/2008 |
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| This is a new one on me too! I agree with Charlie - poetic licenses are granted to all who write in verse so the least we can do is make use of them :) |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/22/2008 |
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Even the best of dancers sometimes oversteps on the partner s toes, so, potatos potatoes tell Charlie to eat the fries!!!
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/22/2008 |
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LOL at your sister's review below--too funny!
Excellent offering, and interesting format! BRAVA, Cryssa, BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
2/22/2008 |
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On the contrary, Cryss-- I'm proud of you for tearing a word. You should do it more often. Come on, live wild-- misspell those words! That's a girl.
It really is a beautiful poem. I'd never heard of a "Waltz Poem" before. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
2/22/2008 |
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| Cryssa, absolutlrey beautiful...misspelled word or not! |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
2/22/2008 |
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...there is no misspelling this fine piece of poetry Cryssa...and no mistaking it for anything else...just fine.
John |
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