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A Waltz Wave Poem (This form, named for Leo Waltz, the Web Manager of Sol Magazine, is a one-stanza titled poem, with nineteen lines; each line has a set number of syllables.
Pattern: 1, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 4, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 1)

 

 

 

 

The

music

of

your love

reverbrates

in my

heart,

and sends

an echo

back to you, to 

fill corners

of our

lives

with the

sweetest of

refrains

and

softest

rain

 

 

Authors Note: Yes, Charlie, I know... I misspelled reverberates, but I did it on purpose.  I could only have three syllables in that line so I cheated and stole a vowel.  (My love won't mind... )

 

 

 

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Reviewed by 000 000
I like the words, the form and the message.
CarolHawks
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
This is beautiful
Reviewed by Diana Wiles
The words and 'shape' of this poem are simply lovely..Love, Diana.
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
The syncapation of this form is beautiful. I read it out loud to get the full impact. AWESOME!

God bless you. Kathy
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Leo Waltz? I think we can all dance to this poem. You fill the corners of our lives and everything becomes round, warm, soft.

Axilea
Reviewed by Mary Coe
A beautiful write.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Stunning elegance that moves across the page, into the reader's soul - beautiful, Cryssa.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Dear Cryssa, The poem is beautiful so is its meaning. Love Emile
Reviewed by l West (Reader)
Cryssa, this is just LOVERLY!
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Romantic, beautiful words!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Susan Phillips
This is a new one on me too! I agree with Charlie - poetic licenses are granted to all who write in verse so the least we can do is make use of them :)
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Even the best of dancers sometimes oversteps on the partner s toes, so, potatos potatoes tell Charlie to eat the fries!!!

Georg
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
LOL at your sister's review below--too funny!

Excellent offering, and interesting format! BRAVA, Cryssa, BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Charlie
On the contrary, Cryss-- I'm proud of you for tearing a word. You should do it more often. Come on, live wild-- misspell those words! That's a girl.

It really is a beautiful poem. I'd never heard of a "Waltz Poem" before. --Charlie
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Cryssa, absolutlrey beautiful...misspelled word or not!
Reviewed by John Leko
...there is no misspelling this fine piece of poetry Cryssa...and no mistaking it for anything else...just fine.
John
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