by Cryssa C
Thursday, February 21, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A Waltz Wave Poem (This form, named for Leo Waltz, the Web Manager of Sol Magazine, is a one-stanza titled poem, with nineteen lines; each line has a set number of syllables.
Pattern: 1, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 4, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 1)
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Authors Note: Yes, Charlie, I know... I misspelled reverberates, but I did it on purpose. I could only have three syllables in that line so I cheated and stole a vowel. (My love won't mind... )
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|Reviewed by 000 000
|I like the words, the form and the message.
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|This is beautiful|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|The words and 'shape' of this poem are simply lovely..Love, Diana.|
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|The syncapation of this form is beautiful. I read it out loud to get the full impact. AWESOME!
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Leo Waltz? I think we can all dance to this poem. You fill the corners of our lives and everything becomes round, warm, soft.
|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|A beautiful write.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Stunning elegance that moves across the page, into the reader's soul - beautiful, Cryssa.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dear Cryssa, The poem is beautiful so is its meaning. Love Emile|
|Reviewed by l West (Reader)
|Cryssa, this is just LOVERLY!|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Romantic, beautiful words!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Susan Phillips
|This is a new one on me too! I agree with Charlie - poetic licenses are granted to all who write in verse so the least we can do is make use of them :)|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Even the best of dancers sometimes oversteps on the partner s toes, so, potatos potatoes tell Charlie to eat the fries!!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|LOL at your sister's review below--too funny!
Excellent offering, and interesting format! BRAVA, Cryssa, BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Charlie
|On the contrary, Cryss-- I'm proud of you for tearing a word. You should do it more often. Come on, live wild-- misspell those words! That's a girl.
It really is a beautiful poem. I'd never heard of a "Waltz Poem" before. --Charlie
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Cryssa, absolutlrey beautiful...misspelled word or not!|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...there is no misspelling this fine piece of poetry Cryssa...and no mistaking it for anything else...just fine.