|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|What a beautiful and awe-inspiring piece, Janet...your wisdom stretches its tentacles to the mind of the reader.
|Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
|exquisite! and to the point! terrific poem! Sandi|
|Reviewed by C. J. Stevens
|An extremely fine, sensitively written, wise and true poem.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Well said and how I wish all could find common ground and learn to respect each other....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Most Excellently Done So Good....
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Well written Janet!!
Thanks for your nice comment!!
|Reviewed by Sandra Hartsell
|This is very beautiful. The way that you start with breeding hate and God not wanting it that way. The feeling of warmth with the wandering stream. Wisdom comes from years of living and children who love us. Maybe a hint of war there with no bombs threatening. Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Creative GENIUS, Janet, invoking nostalgia with a solution: going over rather than through - excellent! So nice to see you here. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Emotionally moving as we all seek that kind of a world where the child can sleep at night and the mother and father as well, without fear of bombs exploding, home breakers attacking, muggers stealing from the little old ladies on busy streets. A wonderful dream to come maybe in our grand childrens lifetimes...all we can do is keep the hope and the dream alive.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|beautifully written poem Janet, it cuts to the quick,knowing how difficult peaceful relationships are...and we wonder why we war
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Creativity packed with wisdom..
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|It's a fight to go under. . .
Much easier to build an. . . "Over Pass"
Well written and smartly done.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Wise ponderings in "The Over Pass"... A poetic feast featuring ontologic, social, historic and spiritaul VOICES. I enjoyed this poem... "The Over Pass" shines.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU