|Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs
What beautiful words. Thanks, Liz
|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|Now, that was too cute! So sweet and beautiful.|
|Reviewed by tisha b
|SWEET AND TO THE POINT|
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Together we are 'one.' A beautiful sentiment and testament to the love you share with your husband. This poem lifts my heart!
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by l West (Reader)
|Ok Cryssa, This is an absolute favorite. I have often wondered how I could possibly love my man with all my heart and yet still live. This shows my how and why I still have a whole heart and he is part of it. I love this, makes me smile and puts together the puzzle in my head.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Awwww, this is so very lovingly tender....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Very clever and lovely poem with a sweet touch of humor!
Wishing you and yours a Blessed and Happy Easter, Cryssa!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beautiful, Cryssa! BRAVA!
Happy Easter to you and your beautiful family!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Beautiful poem. Sounds like you've found the right piece of the puzzle to fit into love's jagged life. ~ Sara|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Say, Sue P has a great idea. I do like this half-hearted shape, though. Cute, cute, cute.
Nonet poem-- never tried one. For those who want to try it,
form: Nine lines.
The first: Nine syllables long
Each succeeding line has one less syllable. (9,8,7,6...)
Thus the last line: One syllable long.
I'd say you did a super job. A+ --Charlie
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Wait a moment! your two halves and his alf...uh?
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Beautifully written, J'adore|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Very nice!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Susan Phillips
|How good would this look as the feminine half of a yin yang symbol! Lovely peom Cryssa.
|Reviewed by c lea harris
|when you find the right person, life can be more easily conquered of it's trials and someone to share the good times, and accompolishments, for someone is there for you, to cheer you on, and you them, sometimes it's take a while to find that special one|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|That is just so beautiful..Love the (almost) heart shape of the lines too! True, true, Love...
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...half hearted write...becomes whole.
wonderful pen of togetherness Cryssa...
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|The two half's make one whole.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|You put a smile on my face this morning Cryssa. Sweet, comical, and romantic!|