|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|You have captured, also, a moments I've had. The way you have this poem formatted is exciting and it makes for an evenflow--I love it, Amber. Thank you, it is so nice to read your writings. Emjoy creating...always.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
This Is So Very Beautiful The Way You Expressed Your Memory..
he being unworthy-but Your Beauty still Aglow & Gleaming in the Strength your Poetry Embellishes of Your Loving Heart
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|To lose a loved one by death hurts, and you feel so alone but have to go on. This is a nice poem and really hit me in the heart. I am truly along and going on with my life reluctantly and could do better but thanks to your poems my days go by somehow.|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Some memories are best left in the past!
But I know its very hard to think
that those times dint exist!
Just dream and look at what the future
Excellent write !
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning star
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Yes, we need to free ourselves from the past.
Perhaps hard to do, but must be done! Great vision!
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Our many lessons are learned in these hard times even though painful.|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Memories are made of???? As unpleasant as they are sometimes, they teach us many lessons that hopefully we'll never make the same mistake twice. Colorful picture and lovely poem.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|As Fee says even a bad love has its moments for at one time it was a good and maybe even a great love that went sour.Just remember it is all a part of who you have become today Amber, a beautiful, caring person. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|It's good when suffering ends. A powerful poem|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Like when Dr. Zhivago thought seeing Lara in the street going by the bus he was traveling with. That fleeing moment...was it she?
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Excellent writing, Amber; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|It's like reliving the whole experience in a few moments. And yes, we usually know that it's a good thing we ended that relationship. Suddenly, it can make things even clearer.
Interesting format Amber.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Even a bad love has its moments and though they may not have been meant to be in reality, maybe a spark of what could have been will always linger in a heart, a reminder that love even though it can be painful at times is still a beuatiuful thing.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|touching in its emotion--|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Isn't the taste of freedom Great???
Love & Peace be with you
My dearest friend
|Reviewed by Cedric III
|i know this piece.
it is weird the number of people who look like other people and the way seeing them can really mess with your head/heart.
i loved a boy who ended his life. on the first year anniversary of his death i was invited to a going away party at work. i didnt know the person leaving but i went along thing it bettr to be around people that night than to be on my own. so i turn up at the party and i kid you not... the leaving guy, who was swiss, looked EXACTLY like the boy who ended his life... madness in a jar!
theres another guy who looks like ths boy too... he's a friend of a friend and for the longest time i refused to have anything to do with my friend incase he bought this other guy along...
i saw the other guy today while clothes shopping in town with my sister and i smiled and spoke to him as i would any other person in the world and i realised... my heart has healed... i still love and miss the boy who ended his life but my heart has healed and is allowing me to move on... its an interesting thing to realise...
thats a whole lot of rambling to tell you i know/understand/appreciate/like your piece a lot =)