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| Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar |
3/29/2008 |
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| Sweet and well said. |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
3/28/2008 |
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LOVE this!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay Strong! |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
3/28/2008 |
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| Now this is an approach to stimulus that makes sense. Why use caffeine when sunbeams offer so much more. With no ill effects to our bodies. Jon Michael Willey |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
3/27/2008 |
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| How original and beautiful...I love the images you conjure up for me..Love, Diana. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
3/27/2008 |
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| And what's even better? Drinking that first cup of coffee while gazing at those sunbeams! Beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
3/26/2008 |
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...a warm wake up...well done Karla...
John |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
3/26/2008 |
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How right you are. . .as always! But. . .can I have a leetle bit of caffeine with the sunshine you are spreading? Hooked, I'm afraid.
Sunshine, coffee, tea, a big smile, a pat on the back, may all of these be yours at a snap of a finger. ['k, it's a tall order, but it's for a tower of strength and ingenuity. Wishes could make it all happen, be y o u r s. An' 'en some!! Loving thoughts from out
Carolina way. <3 <3 <3 'Pea' <3 <3 <3 |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
3/26/2008 |
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| gorgeous |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
3/26/2008 |
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| Tea is fine too Karla, Blessings! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
3/26/2008 |
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| what a wonderful write--so positive and uplifting! |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
3/26/2008 |
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| Perfection, but I need a morning coffee. Sorry. And I can't wait to get into the office tomorrow for a cup of vanilla flavored coffee. I miss it so much when I'm on the road. I've been gone for two weeks and am craving it now! ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz |
3/26/2008 |
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| I wish I had those beautiful sunbeams at 5 am when I go to work...I definitely need a Jump start then... great job :) |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
3/26/2008 |
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It is beautiful the danwing od a new day isnt it
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
3/26/2008 |
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Can I have my cake and eat it too please?????
very creavtive poem Karla!!!
Love, Christine |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/26/2008 |
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Oh how beautiful and a wonderful start to a new day....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
3/26/2008 |
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An excellent romanticism here dear Karla. An energized creation.
Blessings and love ... |
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| Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader) |
3/26/2008 |
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| Hi Karla--You've got the tanka form down. I have to warn you, though. You got me started writing them and now I can't stop! It's an addiction. :) I'm on number 84 now. It's a good form for expressing your feelings easily in a simple structure. |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
3/26/2008 |
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I'll take sunbeams any day! I love the originality of this poem...
Great job!
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
3/26/2008 |
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Well Karla, I would love to agree because I love sun beams and moonbeams, but these days in Connecticut the sun is hardly shining...So I am afraid I have to accept the coffee beans...to the sun's power of healing and positive energy, please send some our way!!!!!!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
3/26/2008 |
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"you have beautiful sunbeams
filtered through the clouds?" sunbeams sounds like sun dried coffe beans, and the cloud is an excellent filter. That's my kind of coffe! |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Russell |
3/26/2008 |
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| I've always loved sunlight through clouds. A beautiful poem, Karla! Rebecca |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
3/26/2008 |
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| Lovely indeed Karla! |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
3/26/2008 |
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| Wish I could say I don't need coffee! :) A nice write. |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
3/26/2008 |
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So true, so true, Karla! A lovely Tanka with a wonderful message!
Micke |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
3/26/2008 |
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| Sounds like your headache is gone. Welcome Day!! Only it decided to snow this morning (again), alighting on my drindling stiff drifts, but it was wet snow, and it's melting the underlayers, so I guess that's good news. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
3/26/2008 |
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| Hey, I'm glad you brought this up (though not likely to make me give up coffee) Did you know the latest research is that by taking a sunbath for only 10' everyday you get all the important Vitamin D you need and that it is a positive factor in keeping away heart trouble as you age (especially in men for some reason) ON that note: I'm heading out for a 10' sunbreak in my side yard... later, michael (computer fixed?) |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
3/26/2008 |
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| Nothing better than a nice cup of coffee while sitting out on my back deck watching the sunrise over the mountains. The coffee is just the frosting on the cake. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
3/26/2008 |
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| Uh . . . Me . . . I need coffee . . . How else will I get my eyes open to see that damndable clouds? . . . Silly girl . . . |
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
3/26/2008 |
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very nice
j+ |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
3/26/2008 |
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| Very nice indeed sweet lady,have a great day,stay safe and well...Hugssssss |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
3/26/2008 |
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| Oh yes but coffee too wouldn't hurt. Hope your headaches better. Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/26/2008 |
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Very nice, Karla; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
3/26/2008 |
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| You've defined "the dawning of" my days. I'm not a coffee drinker, and the first thing I do each morning is raise the blinds so that big eastern sun pours its light into my window. |
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