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Tanka Seven: Natural Caffine
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Wednesday, March 26, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Good morning! :)

Who needs coffee when
you have beautiful sunbeams
filtered through the clouds?
A lovely way to jump start
the dawning of a new day.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (3/26)

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Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar 3/29/2008
Sweet and well said.
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 3/28/2008
LOVE this!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo

STay Positive!
STay Strong!
Reviewed by Jon Willey 3/28/2008
Now this is an approach to stimulus that makes sense. Why use caffeine when sunbeams offer so much more. With no ill effects to our bodies. Jon Michael Willey
Reviewed by Diana Wiles 3/27/2008
How original and beautiful...I love the images you conjure up for me..Love, Diana.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 3/27/2008
And what's even better? Drinking that first cup of coffee while gazing at those sunbeams! Beautiful!
Reviewed by John Leko 3/26/2008
...a warm wake up...well done Karla...
John
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 3/26/2008
How right you are. . .as always! But. . .can I have a leetle bit of caffeine with the sunshine you are spreading? Hooked, I'm afraid.
Sunshine, coffee, tea, a big smile, a pat on the back, may all of these be yours at a snap of a finger. ['k, it's a tall order, but it's for a tower of strength and ingenuity. Wishes could make it all happen, be y o u r s. An' 'en some!! Loving thoughts from out
Carolina way. <3 <3 <3 'Pea' <3 <3 <3
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 3/26/2008
gorgeous
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 3/26/2008
Tea is fine too Karla, Blessings! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 3/26/2008
what a wonderful write--so positive and uplifting!
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 3/26/2008
Perfection, but I need a morning coffee. Sorry. And I can't wait to get into the office tomorrow for a cup of vanilla flavored coffee. I miss it so much when I'm on the road. I've been gone for two weeks and am craving it now! ~ Sara
Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz 3/26/2008
I wish I had those beautiful sunbeams at 5 am when I go to work...I definitely need a Jump start then... great job :)
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 3/26/2008
It is beautiful the danwing od a new day isnt it
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 3/26/2008
Can I have my cake and eat it too please?????
very creavtive poem Karla!!!
Love, Christine
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 3/26/2008
Oh how beautiful and a wonderful start to a new day....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by richard cederberg 3/26/2008
An excellent romanticism here dear Karla. An energized creation.
Blessings and love ...
Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader) 3/26/2008
Hi Karla--You've got the tanka form down. I have to warn you, though. You got me started writing them and now I can't stop! It's an addiction. :) I'm on number 84 now. It's a good form for expressing your feelings easily in a simple structure.
Reviewed by Cryssa C 3/26/2008
I'll take sunbeams any day! I love the originality of this poem...
Great job!

Cryssa
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 3/26/2008
Well Karla, I would love to agree because I love sun beams and moonbeams, but these days in Connecticut the sun is hardly shining...So I am afraid I have to accept the coffee beans...to the sun's power of healing and positive energy, please send some our way!!!!!!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 3/26/2008
"you have beautiful sunbeams
filtered through the clouds?" sunbeams sounds like sun dried coffe beans, and the cloud is an excellent filter. That's my kind of coffe!
Reviewed by Rebecca Russell 3/26/2008
I've always loved sunlight through clouds. A beautiful poem, Karla! Rebecca
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 3/26/2008
Lovely indeed Karla!
Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner 3/26/2008
Wish I could say I don't need coffee! :) A nice write.
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 3/26/2008
So true, so true, Karla! A lovely Tanka with a wonderful message!

Micke
Reviewed by Charlie 3/26/2008
Sounds like your headache is gone. Welcome Day!! Only it decided to snow this morning (again), alighting on my drindling stiff drifts, but it was wet snow, and it's melting the underlayers, so I guess that's good news. --Charlie
Reviewed by Michael Guy 3/26/2008
Hey, I'm glad you brought this up (though not likely to make me give up coffee) Did you know the latest research is that by taking a sunbath for only 10' everyday you get all the important Vitamin D you need and that it is a positive factor in keeping away heart trouble as you age (especially in men for some reason) ON that note: I'm heading out for a 10' sunbreak in my side yard... later, michael (computer fixed?)
Reviewed by Paul Berube 3/26/2008
Nothing better than a nice cup of coffee while sitting out on my back deck watching the sunrise over the mountains. The coffee is just the frosting on the cake.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 3/26/2008
Uh . . . Me . . . I need coffee . . . How else will I get my eyes open to see that damndable clouds? . . . Silly girl . . .
Reviewed by john zimmerman 3/26/2008
very nice

j+
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 3/26/2008
Very nice indeed sweet lady,have a great day,stay safe and well...Hugssssss
Reviewed by Bonnie May 3/26/2008
Oh yes but coffee too wouldn't hurt. Hope your headaches better. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/26/2008
Very nice, Karla; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 3/26/2008
You've defined "the dawning of" my days. I'm not a coffee drinker, and the first thing I do each morning is raise the blinds so that big eastern sun pours its light into my window.



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