|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|This is such a beauty of a gem Georg!
I love your heart!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexoooo
Anyway! What more can I say...
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|I love the second and third stanzas of this gem!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|What a wondrous man of wisdom you are Georg! I agree with Jas, and I applaud your visionary writes,that help us to gain knowledge!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Mighty write, and mighty right|
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Awesome write George!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Such a unique pen Georg, thought provoking and well penned.|
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Excellent write Georg...everyone has already said what needs to be said on this poem...well done, love Holly|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|wow,,, much to ponder with this master piece,,
Gosh,, So happy to see you posting again!
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...bones become stones...in your words...we see the steps of rising self destruction...all towering.
stong voice in this wonderful work Georg...
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|self-destructing societies seems to be the topic today. Had to click on this one after reading so much ancient history for my novel. Good choice of images: who but the men of the B.C. would have known destruction so well as you point out. Who but the "Children of Poseidon" in the fabled Atlantis would have witnessed it. A good poem and a good idea...
good writing, Michael
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Feeling any better???
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Mankin is hiding in the shadow of his own destruction. Beautiful work|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|I think we all wonder about this plant at one time or other
And I agreed with Vickie We are our own worst enemy
I cant sit to long but wanted to read
your poem its a brilliant writing
Wishing you Peace Love and Hugssss...Morning Star
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|You are standing on the summit of tower of Babel my friend, and have united all understanding in the human heart, surpassing dialects at the summit. You have wiped Poseidon's tears. Bless you! Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Good Morning George,
I have wondered about our planet being a huge grave yard with all the centuries that have past. Your words are of spiritual pursuits & I enjoyed as always your wisdoms of your poetic pen!
Your words are very true, We are our own self destruction through many facets of the word as in envy, hate, greed all the heartless theft of love & kindness & generosity & more important acceptance of our differences & perceptions of all things.
Have A Lovely Day
& No Bones About It You Are A Masterful Poet!!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|We have certainly been led away from the righteous path...even the path of common sense!
Your true voice shines brightly in this poem, Georg. We need more poets to speak out this way. THANKS
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Salutations and benisons to Author-Poet Georg Edvard Mateos,
FIVE STARS GENERAL OF THE POETRY's ARMY.
If Poets could retire, You could pack up... after the signing of
"Salty Tears of Poseidon".
Thank You for honoring THE NATIONAL POETRY MONTH with this DIADEM for ERATO!
In respect and sworn admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Georg, this is excellent. And yes some day that pile of bones become a real Tower of Babble.
one day that pile of so many bones
will let us to reach the skies…
Excellent clarity of foresight, my friend.
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Wonderful sad write Georg. As always I loved it and love you. Love, Bonnie|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
So nice reading you again - you grab the reader by the heart, give it a squeeze - excellent.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Yes man has surely made a mess of things, especially in the destruction of Mother Earth and between mankind. Poignant poem, my friend...
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Riveting words of wonder and awe at man's dissappointment in man. If we cannot find ways to respect each other than the God's can never be respected either. Well done my friend.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Thank you for sharing a wonderful write Georg even if it is the truth and the truth is so often sad to face.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|man has become its own self destructive tsunami...
How so sadly true, brother. And these sad days, I now often wonder if this has been mankind's pre-ordained destiny, or if we could have traveled a much brighter, and a much better, path.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! 'Rows after rows of white stones with fading names into the past, one day that pile of so many bones will let us to reach the skies'.....'...His salty tears of pain can dry' ----MOST BEAUTIFUL WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my,excellent writing sweet man,have a wonderful and safe day Georg,Hugsssss,much love to you|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Excellent writing, dear friend; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D