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Salty Tears of Poseidon
by Georg E Mateos
Sunday, April 06, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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We don't only make our own Lord sad, but we have given Olympus a cause for tears, man has become its own self destructive tsunami...






…you can be a god, a mighty one,
full of tsunami rages, giving fright
to in need many a poor fisherman
casting his net in an empty invite…

…distant the thunder comes near,
the gods of war are coming to fight,
they don’t use soldiers made of tin,
but the sons that came from man…

…gods abandoned their Olympus
as looking down they saw how bad
the human spirit has tried to climb
a Babel Tower made of quick sand…

…rows after rows of white stones,
with fading names into the past,
one day that pile of so many bones
will let us to reach the skies…

…and doing so we raise on tiptoes
with a kerchief hold in our hand,
so we can reach Poseidon's face
and his salty tears of pain can dry.




 

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Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 4/13/2008
This is such a beauty of a gem Georg!
I love your heart!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexoooo

STay Positive!
Anyway! What more can I say...
Reviewed by Cryssa C 4/8/2008
I love the second and third stanzas of this gem!
Cryssa
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/7/2008
What a wondrous man of wisdom you are Georg! I agree with Jas, and I applaud your visionary writes,that help us to gain knowledge!

Love,
ET
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 4/7/2008
Mighty write, and mighty right
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 4/7/2008
Awesome write George!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 4/7/2008
Such a unique pen Georg, thought provoking and well penned.
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 4/7/2008
Excellent write Georg...everyone has already said what needs to be said on this poem...well done, love Holly
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 4/6/2008
wow,,, much to ponder with this master piece,,
Gosh,, So happy to see you posting again!
Christine
Reviewed by John Leko 4/6/2008
...bones become stones...in your words...we see the steps of rising self destruction...all towering.
stong voice in this wonderful work Georg...
John
Reviewed by Michael Guy 4/6/2008
self-destructing societies seems to be the topic today. Had to click on this one after reading so much ancient history for my novel. Good choice of images: who but the men of the B.C. would have known destruction so well as you point out. Who but the "Children of Poseidon" in the fabled Atlantis would have witnessed it. A good poem and a good idea...
good writing, Michael
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/6/2008
Most excellent...!!!!

Feeling any better???

Love tinka
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 4/6/2008
Mankin is hiding in the shadow of his own destruction. Beautiful work
Reviewed by Morning Star 4/6/2008
I think we all wonder about this plant at one time or other
And I agreed with Vickie We are our own worst enemy
I cant sit to long but wanted to read
your poem its a brilliant writing
Wishing you Peace Love and Hugssss...Morning Star
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 4/6/2008
You are standing on the summit of tower of Babel my friend, and have united all understanding in the human heart, surpassing dialects at the summit. You have wiped Poseidon's tears. Bless you! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 4/6/2008
Good Morning George,
I have wondered about our planet being a huge grave yard with all the centuries that have past. Your words are of spiritual pursuits & I enjoyed as always your wisdoms of your poetic pen!
Your words are very true, We are our own self destruction through many facets of the word as in envy, hate, greed all the heartless theft of love & kindness & generosity & more important acceptance of our differences & perceptions of all things.
Have A Lovely Day
& No Bones About It You Are A Masterful Poet!!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 4/6/2008
We have certainly been led away from the righteous path...even the path of common sense!
Your true voice shines brightly in this poem, Georg. We need more poets to speak out this way. THANKS

Micke
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 4/6/2008
Salutations and benisons to Author-Poet Georg Edvard Mateos,
FIVE STARS GENERAL OF THE POETRY's ARMY.

If Poets could retire, You could pack up... after the signing of
"Salty Tears of Poseidon".

Thank You for honoring THE NATIONAL POETRY MONTH with this DIADEM for ERATO!

In respect and sworn admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 4/6/2008
Georg, this is excellent. And yes some day that pile of bones become a real Tower of Babble.

one day that pile of so many bones
will let us to reach the skies…


Excellent clarity of foresight, my friend.

Walt
Reviewed by Bonnie May 4/6/2008
Wonderful sad write Georg. As always I loved it and love you. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/6/2008
Georg,

So nice reading you again - you grab the reader by the heart, give it a squeeze - excellent.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 4/6/2008
Georg,
Yes man has surely made a mess of things, especially in the destruction of Mother Earth and between mankind. Poignant poem, my friend...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/6/2008
Riveting words of wonder and awe at man's dissappointment in man. If we cannot find ways to respect each other than the God's can never be respected either. Well done my friend.

Feee
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 4/6/2008
Thank you for sharing a wonderful write Georg even if it is the truth and the truth is so often sad to face.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 4/6/2008
man has become its own self destructive tsunami...

How so sadly true, brother. And these sad days, I now often wonder if this has been mankind's pre-ordained destiny, or if we could have traveled a much brighter, and a much better, path.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 4/6/2008
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! 'Rows after rows of white stones with fading names into the past, one day that pile of so many bones will let us to reach the skies'.....'...His salty tears of pain can dry' ----MOST BEAUTIFUL WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 4/6/2008
Oh my,excellent writing sweet man,have a wonderful and safe day Georg,Hugsssss,much love to you
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/6/2008
Excellent writing, dear friend; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D



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