|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
I love to take my boys to Franchier Lake
or Lemon Lake to swim, what a blast they have
(my boys=3 emglish springers)
My Boy Lightening Finally Started Lifting His Leg 3 months ago...I am so proud of him (he is almost 3 years old)
he has hump hump on "winnie the spooz" down pat though
poor poor winnie..TSK TSK TSK
(oh I am sorry was that to gross?)
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I think I shall pass on the offer but thanks anyway, Rufuz. (LOL) Best wishes to you and to your dad,
|Reviewed by larry linville
|Thanks for the explanation. I thought the lifted leg meant you were about to kick me.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Favorite Uncle and favorite Uncle, don't listen to them Rufuz, I am the one opening the doors for yah!
I have my photo camera ready, a little squirt on your Daddy? just for a Xmas card for the rest of the gang?
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Rufuz...seems you're always caught 'twist and 'tween those two uncles
Ed and Dad! Now, wuldja really be raisin' yer leg on yer friends? Oooooops!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Rufuz, dad made you write this,you're too nice to pee on den members!
BUt I still luv ya!;-)
|Reviewed by Tom Hyland
|RUFIE - To PEE - or not to PEE? That is the Question!
Don't you pay no mind to them Makeshift Uncles -
Under Sheep's clothing, they're really Skunkles!
Go PEE-PEE on PEE-WEE, without Regard,
Then Lift your Leg next, on ole Edvard!
When the Rain is a-Pourin' -
It's Okay to Donate your Urine!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Cute write, Rufuz; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|:) Cute, Rufuz, I'll keep that in mind when I meet ya. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Oh Rufuz how generous of you!!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|They should see me when I squat after eatin’ ham & eggs!
Dear Rufie Boy,
Now that would make a great Christmas Card Picture. You squattin, and yer old Dad Pooper Scoopin it all up.
Please send me a huge glossy, and I'll get the cards made up for you. And try to add a little green and red dye to them ham and eggs - it'll make the pic much more festive.
Your Very Favorite Uncle,
Peeeeeee Weeeeeeeeeeeee Ed
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|LOL!!! Wonderful delightful poem, Ed!!! I like reading your poems because they always have a rhyme scheme and is always a fun to read!!! Heeeheee!!!
Sandie May :o)
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Oh you and Georg are so funny. Loved this. Bonnie|