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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
4/18/2008 |
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| A heart broken by love could only be repaired by love. Wonderful poem |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
4/17/2008 |
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A heartfelt sad write
I hope she finds a true love that
Can appreciate her!
Because if your going to love
You must be wiling to give it your all!!
Excellent write!
Peace Love and Hugssss....Morning star
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
4/16/2008 |
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| touching and life travels this way sometimes, great down to earth |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
4/14/2008 |
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| A truly heart touching write. Life is so mysterious at times. |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
4/13/2008 |
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What an astounding sad ( but I hear hope) write coming from your! pen Gwendolyn1
I most enjoyed the truth in poetry form!
Write On!
Stay Positive!
HOpe her life improves happily and his too! and if children involved!
STay STrong1
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexoooo |
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| Reviewed by Olita Williams |
4/12/2008 |
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This is an excellent write. Yes it cries out for love and companionship. They say the golden coinage of this age is beauty but I really think it is to find a companion. There are so many lonely out there.
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
4/12/2008 |
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| A touching write. Manytimes this happens ,and with it comes the heart break and tears. I pray your frind finally found happiness.....M |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/12/2008 |
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Sadly, this is not an uncommon theme in this world, Gwen. Very effectively expressed. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/11/2008 |
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Heartbreaking write; so sad when love goes bad or when your mate doesn't appreciate you!! Your friend (and you) are in my prayers!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
4/11/2008 |
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| Leave it to a gentle heart like you to write of such a thing. God Bless, love Holly |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/11/2008 |
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Some lives are build like Rubick's cube, some will find the right combination...but, mostly, will not.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
4/11/2008 |
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Too bad she didn't think to say, "Thank you
Jesus for removing this burden from me now". |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
4/11/2008 |
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| Boy it looks like many of us were in the same mind today. Wonderful write and very sad. Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/11/2008 |
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Riddle like lines that allow the reader to question and wonder at the sadness and needs of ones who have lost love that once was and perhaps found love that may be.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
4/11/2008 |
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| It is so sad when the petals of a beautiful relationship begin to shed. A heartfelt pen. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/10/2008 |
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Always find it so disheartening when people feel trapped in situations they believe they have no control over. You have penned this well with much emotion running throughout....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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