|Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink
|This puts me in mind of one of my favorite songs "Auld Lang Syne" by Dan Fogelburg. If you know the song, you will understand what I am saying. But like that song, you have my heart yearning for you to console your being and let you rest your head on my shoulders. Well said, Fee.
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Thank God I've never experienced this. It sounds like it makes the soul ache. Strong emotion in this piece, Fee. Well done!
|Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar
|What a painful meeting! So real and described so perfectly.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I can relate to this, Fee. Nicely done. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Wow your words captured this chance meeting beautifully!
No this has never happened to me but
I know of a few friends that have gone through
One of this event!!
I imagine its very emotional!
Peace Love And light...Morning star
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Love can't have a muted voice.|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|"In summer’s warmth I feel a chill"
does this feeling ever get past any of us? If we tell the truth, it doesn't.It's sad that we can't have everyone we desire. That is one of life's trials. This one causes a flutter in my stomach.
Blessings and love,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|you have captures this event so well with all the emotion and feelings|
|Reviewed by A PAX
yes it can and does happen.........but sometimes you smile and thank god you got away!! lol
your music/poem is lyrical and touching!!! :) :) pax A
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|It is hard to answer the Whys at times,,,sometimes they remain unanswered forever.... Wonderful write Fee :)Christine|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Those chance meetings often truly bring back many memories, and your poem describes them very well.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Fee, lucky you!
Thanks for that little peek inside the life of the lucky (?) ones.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Regrets...we all have them. Well written piece about lost love.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i experienced this some years ago, so this poem rekindled those feelings ... well done, Felix ...|
|Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines
|Oh, Fee, well done! This anguish could not have been expressed with more clarity. This one begs to be published!
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|A very bittersweet chance meeting that would have been better served to have avoided. Sometimes we must live with the hand fate deals, sometimes we wish we did not have to....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|Well I can't say this has ever happened to me.. but I am sure that it can be a mixed blessing for most...
|Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner
|ahhh memories of lost love, and love that never ever dies. Been there... excellent write many can relate to.|
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|As Always, Writing and Expressing as only you can do Fee. Every word ebbs and flows tugging at the heart. Deborah:)|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Chilling regrets, but you are alive, barely. Sad, but penned great. Liz|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Sensitivity and romanticism spill forth from this bittersweet write - you capture the intricacies of the heart very well.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
I went looking for mine :) and I found him, and it was a 4 years disaster :(
I Love The Dickens Outa Him Thou. I have known him for 28 years. He is a womanizer. I can't blame him for looking-but sharing? Well I can't have that because I am a very selfish woman :) so I loved him enough to turned him loose on all the lovely ladies out there. He tried to be loyal. lol
Your Poem Is Yearning With Hope, and still sad. Your font is beautiful.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|You capture the moment of a broken caress.|
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
|I think all we "adults" have had a similiar experience. You wrote about it so well my friend and the ending line is awesome.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Sadness, in moving lines of what could have been - excellently expressed, (((Fee))).
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.