by JASMIN HORST E. P. SEILER
Friday, April 11, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Tentacles stretching reaching climbing
Reaching for the sun,
Reaching to be warmed, to be loved, caressed,
Embraced and seared by its heat,
Stretching, enlarging from its foundation,
Carrying seeds, to offer the Goddess,
Entwined, stretching, smooching vines,
Looking for fulfillment, release of longing,
Explosions, dance of stars, heaven.
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|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Your poem is fufilled with inspration :)|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Keep stretching, reaching, and climbing, my friend - and ignore my most uncouth brother!!!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful write, my friend; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
LOL at KArla'a comment below; too funny! LOL
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|"As you know, an octopus has eight testicles...Oh megosh TENTACLES! ! !
Seared by the sun's heat? Ouch!
|Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines
|It's funny, I did exactly the same thing as Karla with that first line! LOL I love this one, Jasmin ... dreaming the impossible dream and, with it, reaching for the stars. Very cool!
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Fulfillment, INDEED, Jamsin-Horst! There's inspiration and happiness in this most beautiful poem...very touching...Thankful for your "return"...
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|STUNNINGLY imaged - but have to tell you the truth, misread the first line as "testicles stretching reaching climbing" LOL Sigh...know where my mind went: straight to the gutter!! Forgive me??
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *still chuckling*
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|To envision one dancing under the stars with the sparks of love wrapping around in total fulfillment....
Be always safe,