|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|So sad and heartbreaking...but your writing is truly beautiful.|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Abdi,love is truly an island. That island is all of God's universe. For your reunion with your loved ones, may the time take Mercury's feet. Jon Michael Willey|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|A desert lion will never be happy on a green paradise or in a golden cage...freedom is like those dunes sand grains rolling on your country, unhindered and just going where the wind goes...with freedom.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Abdi Noor this is a tear jerker,and heart breaker...though it is a superb poem!You all are ever in my prayers...
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Awww...I miss my mom so badly haven't seen her in almost 5 years. This is lovely and heartfelt...I know the feeling too well.|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This brought tears to my eyes, Abdi-Noor; how I felt the ache in your heart as you placed these words upon the page. This is a very moving offering and I pray for the safe reuniting of this family. In a single line, you really sum it all up.
"Feeling lost in the middle of loss" So powerful are those words.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
By these lines, I take it you're separated from your family? Oh, I pray not - will have to double prayers being said for you and your family. May you have a reunion, soon. Powerfully poignant longing - well written. :(
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.