|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Don't want to be morbid. But still grieving Tom. Will be a year Aug 17 and the photo reminded me that I bought 2 bunches of daisies just like these to put on his grave on that day. Daisies are for love too, and I loved him very much. Time heals though but it takes so long. I don't have too many aimless afternoons though, keep busy.|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|beautiful... a poem that made me feel as though I were there, on an aimless afternoon...
|Reviewed by David Hightower
|Dawn - Love the simplicity and rich imagery of this poem. It has the tone of an aimless afternoon, and holds a completeness in its simplicity. - David|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|superb imagery,Dawn, made me feel the wind in my hair...lovely poem
shows that aimless days are some of the best;-)...ET
|Reviewed by R Beeman
|ah a restless soul lost and searching i feel this. should be picking the petals for you to share. the sense of smelling honeysuckle is awesome. thanks much
|Reviewed by L Hippler
|Really nicely done, Dawn.
Maybe itís just me, but I thought the picking and tossing of petals could represent a little thoughtlessness.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A truly marvelous way to spend any afternoon.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|The seeming obliviousness of the subject could mean he is either so in tune with nature that he just absorbs the beauty around him...
or he is one of those who do not know how to take the time, lay in the shade and smell the flowers.
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...tossed petals...perhaps return in the winds whispers. Beautiful images are painted here...your afternoon in most wonderful light.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Exquisitely imaged, you take us there, Dawn - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|I was saying, she loves me she loves me not, she loves me, yikes I lose again, as the wind carried them off...|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Beautiful thoughts and glorious images. I didn't want it to end.....|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|You painted here perfect image of feelings and emotions|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful poem and picture, Dawn; very nice! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Bad! Bad, bad!! A heavy dose of metaphorism is alive and kicking herein, my dear Dawn . . .|
|Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
|Nice work, I enjoyed your poem!|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|`Beautiful imagery,, I can feel the breeze,, excellent Dawn!
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
I love the gentle carefree feelings that this poem personifies. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.