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OverWhelmed, Or: The Simple Things
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Monday, April 14, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Image (c) 2006, Karla Dorman


The heavens are opened, shaken,
stirred, pressed down, overflowing
with blessings.  Sight:  the sky is a
perfect stretch of blue.  Hearing:
happy songs of mockingbird and
cardinal fill ears full.  Touch:  air
cool, with low humidities.  Smell:
Spring scents nose with delicate
perfume.  Taste:  the love of God is
sweet.  Have breath in my lungs;
can walk, talk, think.  The simple
things, what more?  OverWhelmed.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (4/14)

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Cryssa C 4/17/2008
Sometimes it is pretty overwhelming when I consider all that I truly have been blessed with...
Cryssa
Reviewed by Mary Coe 4/17/2008
Beautiful picture and poem.
Reviewed by Jon Willey 4/16/2008
Though we are little, exquisite pieces of nature. It continuously overwhelms our psyches with beauty and power unmatched. Most people overlook nature and never truly appreciate and enjoy all that it continuously offers us. Your poem shows you have the wisdom to reel in nature's unrivaled beauty.
Reviewed by Michael Guy 4/15/2008
I'm biased to anyone who takes cloud and sky photos, I used to back in the 80's but I'm leaving that dept. to you now! And what an "open sky" message. Your photo work must've brought on a personal and religious conversion back in 2006 (a lot of c. for that year)
I look this well-developed short-block style of yours - well crafted lines...
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce 4/15/2008
What a spectacular photo.!!!
You are not only a great poetess!!!
You are also a wonderful photographer!!!

Sandie May :o)
Reviewed by John Leko 4/14/2008
...the air of inspiration...a breath of blue...are found in your shared beauty of life.
well done Karla...
John
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 4/14/2008
Your poem goes well with those cloudy wings. Enjoyed
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines 4/14/2008
Simply love the "wing" in the pic. My Yacqi ancesters certainly would have danced and rattled and done something (good, I hope) because of it. Wish I could have been there. Ummm, maybe I was.

Swami Tedders sees a book, each page with a pic & poem, in your future.

Ted
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 4/14/2008
Very well said, feelings many share....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 4/14/2008
Beautiful write, love the pic and the poem
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 4/14/2008
I see the wings of Pegasus or perhaps an angel in this photo--wow
Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink 4/14/2008
I love the way that you captured the things in life that we most often take for granted. Thank you for sharing.

Sanja xo
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 4/14/2008
The little things that we take for granted are the greatest miracles in themselves
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 4/14/2008
Fabulous! this is a masterpiece dear sister and friend, karla. Keep them coming please.
Abdi-Noor
Reviewed by Rebecca Russell 4/14/2008
Wonderfully positive piece! It was like a beam of sunlight on this dreary day. Rebecca
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/14/2008
Girl you have had an epiphany! Your last several poems have been stunning! Inspires me to soar with you;-)!

Love,
ET
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 4/14/2008
Wonderful! I love it...I'm with you all the way.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/14/2008
"Have breath in my lungs;/can walk, talk, think. The simple things, what more?/OverWhelmed."

How can we go wrong in life?? We have God; what more do we need?? Beautiful write of faith and blessings untold; very well penned! Brava, Karla!

Love the picture; awesome capture of God's beauty in nature! Looks like an angel in the clouds!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) 4/14/2008
The simple things are the most precious. Well said,overwhelmed. In gratitude forever for caring and sharing. < < < <HUGS>>>>Mikii
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 4/14/2008
A neat way to illustrate the senses with vibrant images and positive thoughts. Lovely poem.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 4/14/2008
What everybody else said...as usual, the best...e & R
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 4/14/2008
And when in peace, the air you breath will carry the softeness of feathers wear by angels.

Georg
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 4/14/2008
The simple things in life, and Spring;
Such loveliness and joy, they truly bring!
Reviewed by Charlie 4/14/2008
I like this. I think it'd be stronger without the "So grateful" and "lovely morning" lines though... just skipping that and ending with "OverWhelmed" leaves me with a place to put those feelings-- what do you think? I do love that last word... especially after talking about the sky overhead. --Charlie
Reviewed by Bonnie May 4/14/2008
Thank God for you and your inspiration. You are truely a joy. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 4/14/2008
Truly inspiring Karla, a beauty of a poem.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/14/2008
This is one of your very best and reads like a gentle voice whispering in my ear. Well done.

hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 4/14/2008
Beautiful thoughts Karla!
Reviewed by Paul Berube 4/14/2008
Very well done Karla. God bless; no ! God HAS blessed you my friend. Have a great day. (HUGS) Paul



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