|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Absolutely Beautiful my friend! :)
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Classic lines, fore by fore.
|Reviewed by Tactfully Naive
|That's why I simply stand at the edge of the shore and just skim my thoughts across the advancing waves of life. Some of these sink to the bottom of forgetfulness while others are washed ashore to be picked up and skimmed once more. My memory's still too full.
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|I love the analogy and imagery of this piece. You gave the sea a totally different quality than what is usually talked about.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Wonderful writing,stay safe and well...Hugssss|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Ah yes... her spiteful face. We must never forget that she can turn and mean and nasty with it. But this is such beautiful poetry as ever, Anita. Full of poise, grace, rhythm, balance... and an awful lot of wisdom, beauty and freshness of concept within. Bless you, Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|This is very unique. I've read many poems about the ocean & beach but never one like this. Nicely done!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Sorry bout that, it was not the sea, it was me....|
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|well you get the "eye-catching title of the day award" from me anyway.. And what a surprising, original and unexpected insight into those who Do NOT romance the sea. Conrad's comment comes from one who has spent time "sailing on it" not standing by it (I've read "Typhoon")And yes, I too when often "blue" have found the "lie" to that old myth: "you just need a beach walk!?"
Still I think you'd like my musical poem on the Sea, "August Ocean Overture".... later, michael guy
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Nice image Anita and quite an interesting poem that could easily represent what happens sometimes when we share with the wrong people.
|Reviewed by R Beeman
|hmm i am so glad that i read this work. powerful words as the waves both cleanse and yet destroy. when we weather the storms or tides, then the sea becomes an ally in our life, but when we cast our thoughts to the waves and they fall in the depths, then truly we have been betrayed.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|oh such agony in the sea's betrayal...pic and poem made for each other...
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Your poem flows so smothly from beginning to end; yes...trippingly over the tongue! A great match, too...the pic and poem. Lovely...Pax
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|So many betrayals in life... until one discovers that security is an illusion and finds the courage to trust and venture to live. It's the only way to take THE real journey.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Fascinating photograph! Nice twist to the usual, interesting concept....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|I LOVE The Photograph!
This Is A Perfectous Poetic Write.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Fantastic Anita, this one is a definate masterpiece, I love the cadence, the image projected and the honest open feelings that come trhough so clearly of pain and aguish. Very well done.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|My sea never relates what I say to anyone else or brings them back to me...you must have been a bad little girl...good to sea you dropping by to write...Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|WOW,, I love this,, The only secrets that are sacred are the ones we keep within...
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Good conclusion. Vulnerable soul... bully sea... it all makes for an interesting relationship, if not a sound one.--But definitely a resounding one. --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I love this. Metaphors galore . . . To have a secret means never to tell it . . . Even to your supposedly best friend . . .|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I do love the way you expressed this. I can relate. And I agree with the sentiments that you express via your verses here. Thank you. Love and best wishes,