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Mizzly
by Sanja Dayslink

Monday, April 14, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Nothing personal, just the way I feel about intimacy in the rain.


 

We
step out
of the car and
into the street You
 can hear it hit softly, like
the patter of little feet It’s such a
magical time, like sunset on the ocean
We’re caught in its spell, and we move in slow
motion I move in close, with my hands on her waist
I take it slow, no rush, no haste The rain slowly falls and
the full moon shines She slides her arms around my neck, and
says “your mine” The rain picks up and it soaks our hair But our eyes
are focused, we have no cares I whisper in her ear, “I love you my dear 
“You will always be smiling, you have no use for tears” “I will love you forever,
 is my vow to you” “You are my heavenly dove, may it always be true  ”She
smiles at me, with joy and bliss My lips meet hers, and in the rain we kiss The
rain itself, dances all around As I kiss my sweetheart, without a sound The rain
glides through the air and I hold her tight It’s like the angels are crying, such a
beautiful sight Her tongue touches mine and its ecstasy A kiss in the rain
sets my emotions free She pulls my lower lip and it takes its toll My whole
body tingles, like I’ve lost control As the rain falls down I just can’t believe 
That I need her to move, to think, to breathe I take a step back and
I look in her eyes She tells me she loves me and my heart
 just flies If you believe perfection simply isn’t real 
Kiss your love in the rain, and I promise you’ll
 feel Many things in this world can
wash away pain But none of them
 compare, to kiss in the rain

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) 4/15/2008
Your last line brought a tear to my eye......beautifully written and eyecatching! Well Done! Deborah
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 4/15/2008
Love the poem, the picture, and the format, Sanja!
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 4/14/2008
This is such a beautiful truth.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/14/2008
This is a glorious romantic poem, I'm so glad I stopped by your den! Thank you for sharing! It made my heart soar;-)!

ET
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 4/14/2008
All the many blessings brought out by a light spring or summer shower can awaken so many of the feelings we keep hidden, well said...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/14/2008
This beautiful raindrop or teardrop shaped poem breathes sensuality like a lover breathes the perfume of her lover's bed at night. It is amazing how different weather can affect our sexual arousals differently...I often feel this same way when it is snowing and walking holding hands in the night. For others it is a brisk fall day walking in the woods with the leafs falling around them. I guess Mother Nature has a way of providing aprodisiacs naturally to lovers.

hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/14/2008
Neat write, Sanja; love the format and the title! Cleverly done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Love the title, too! :)
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/14/2008
Neat form, and love the mood you set here - mizzly. :) Well done, Sanja!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.



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