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Upon My Roof...Light Footsteps
by Susan K. de Vegter

Wednesday, April 16, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A soft spring rain like a lovers breath
Upon my roof... light footsteps
A sweet deluge of kisses
Moist and nurturing ease
Greeting my morning with passion
Like a lover come to tease
Oh sweet first rain of Springtime
Amore ' come to call
Kissing my rooftop with magic
Caressing my morning and all
Urging all of the new growth
Stand up and reach for the skies
Show your panonine colors
Let your messages fly
Sweetening taste of a lover
Lifting my passions for Spring
Calling upon all my favors
Perfuming me with a sweet rain.

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Reviewed by Douglas Bentley 4/18/2008
I can always tell when it's going to rain.
I smell it coming.
I can always tell when love is just a read away
I look for your name
Another great title.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 4/17/2008
... so soft and tender, the warmth here evaporates it into the beauty of the morning mist that weaves its way into everything. As detoxing and refreshing; as cosseting and stimulating as a sauna, Susan. Now to find the cucumber slices for my eyes... in the hope that love might nibble them away! :)) True SKdV stuff. Kate xx
Reviewed by Ted Bossis 4/17/2008
clearly your sense of beauty is back in-tact .~. evol smaerd _ TedSo
Reviewed by richard cederberg 4/17/2008
The heart of the poetess overflowing with love and gratitude. Touches the heart Belle, this superb metaphor.
Blessings ...
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 4/17/2008
Don't you love when rain go on discrete? just tiptoing over the rooftops with that delicate tap dancing following the deep bass drums of the far away thunder...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed 4/17/2008
Oh sweet first rain of Springtime
Amore ' come to call

Lovely, Indeed!
Reviewed by George Carroll 4/17/2008
Yes, like love, rain does bring forth new life.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 4/17/2008
What can I say . . . Broome has said it all . . .
Reviewed by F William Broome 4/16/2008
Now, I KNOOW that Susan de V is back, and is in rare and romantic form! No one writes like you do, allowing our everyday gongs to be touched like that of a lover and in feeling the loving ! ! ! This is magnificent. - Bill

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 4/16/2008
mmmm..this is a beautiful gratitude to spring
Reviewed by Pierre Ortega 4/16/2008
This poem is magical, I love the way you equate passion with spring.

Love, Pierre
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/16/2008
Ahh this is sublime loving in romantic mode, Susan! A beauty!...ET
Reviewed by jude forese 4/16/2008
beautiful imagery and motif ... emotively superb ...
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 4/16/2008
there is nothing more cleansing or spiritually refreshing as the rains of spring.A wonderful expression of spring, rain, etc
Reviewed by Randall Barfield 4/16/2008
This is a nice one. The opening 4 lines are hard to top. Thanks for posting.
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 4/16/2008
This is such a beautiful poem. enjoyed
Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/16/2008
Good to see you posting again and not at all to see such a lovely and magical write as this being offered as a gift to your readers. Lovely indeed. Welcome back dear friend.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 4/16/2008
Very relaxing imagery in this write Susan. Peaceful and serene. Very well done my friend. God bless.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/16/2008
Another one the StormSpinner wishes she'd penned - sublime, Susan, well done! Again, the image is as beautiful as the write.

(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.

Hope you're feeling better soon.
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