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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
4/23/2008 |
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This poem touches my heart and soul. It conveys the tragedy of war and its impact on our children and other generations to come. Peace seems to be a word in the dictionary rather that an action that we perpetuate. You, my friend, are a wonderful teller of truths!
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
4/20/2008 |
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WOW! Georg. I am amazed at your true story telling! and then Belle picking up from where you left off!
I learned much here and the sadness brings tears!
Write On!
WArmest blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay Strong!
P.S. This poem I will treasure and Belle's too! Such heart moving experiences you share! |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
4/18/2008 |
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poignant and touching, Georg...
Thank you.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
4/18/2008 |
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Great celebration of The National Poetry Month.
I have posted "Twilight of times past" on the POETRY'S PAGE FOR THE NATIONAL POETRY MONTH. THE FOLLOWING IS THE link:
http://creativethinkersintl.ning.com/forum/topic/show?id=1105089%3ATopic%3A28584&page=1&commentId=1105089%3AComment%3A30672&x=1#1105089Comment30672
I have enjoyed the reading of "Twilight of times past".
Thank You for adding value to Poetry.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/17/2008 |
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Georg this is one of the best war memorial/protest poems that I have ever had the privalege of reading. It is defiantely a keeper and it is defiantely in my books worthy of publication for sure.
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
4/17/2008 |
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Moving poem Georg,,, The last line is such a tear jerker,,,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/17/2008 |
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Thank you George for this truly brilliant look at the wastes of war
and how we are caught up in its never ending dilemma's! You are a gifted writer, and i'm so glad you're back and feeling well I pray!
Love,
ET |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
4/17/2008 |
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| This is such a beautiful tragedy.You have written a piece of history here. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
4/17/2008 |
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| Peace? Will we ever see it again? Excellent poem. Liz |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/17/2008 |
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| Wish it were true but already our enemies are plotting to kill more who don't wear uniforms but are innocent civilians going about there daily business only to have another 9/11/01 blow up in their faces. |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
4/17/2008 |
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| poem of love and liberty-- of death and a will to live... and reasons to live... --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
4/17/2008 |
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AMEN!
This poem Is Very Powerful Piece George!
I am glad you are feeling better!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
4/17/2008 |
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You are holding Americas heart in the palm of your hands,caressing it's pain and happiness all at once, a wonderful expression of hope and peace. Peace and Blessings onto friend! Jasmin Horst
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
4/17/2008 |
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! Only this word I can say about YOUR poem!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
4/17/2008 |
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| Georg this is truly masterful. I have posted the companion poem for it from a mother's prospective. |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
4/17/2008 |
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Twilight of past time is a beautiful write
Filled with sadness !!!!
Beautiful words of wisdom!
Magnificent Piece!!
Peace Love and Light.....Hugssssssss....Morning Star
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
4/17/2008 |
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| Very melancholic, beautifully written too. |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
4/17/2008 |
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A most beautiful poem, Georg...with a sadness from the heart of a soldier that evokes our own sadness of history. Surely a worthy poem for National Poetry Month, it is!
Peace ~~ Micke
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
4/17/2008 |
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Twilights of times past, please don’t send
more of my children to fight your wars. The world should pay heed to this lofty call. This is a masterpiece of war poetry and an eye opening to peace lovers all over the world. Thanks George of this great offering. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/17/2008 |
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Sad write, Georg; hope you are okay! Very well penned!
(((HUGS))), much love, and prayers~ As always, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/17/2008 |
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Powerfully penned sadness, Georg - those that forget history are condemned to repeat it - welcome back, you've been missed, hope you're feeling better -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
4/17/2008 |
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| Nice to read you again,great writing sweet man,very nice indeed...have a wonderful and safe day...Hugssssssss |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/17/2008 |
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| Very glad to see you back, Colonel Edvard, and you've truly penned a most heartfelt and profound and thought provoking piece here, brother. |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
4/17/2008 |
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| Wars, rumors of wars. This poem ripped my heart into pieces. Oh what a touching write. Very painful to read as I know it was to write. You are a true poet my friend, for you know how to touch hearts. Love,Bonnie |
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