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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
5/7/2008 |
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WOW! What a poem!
The imagery is astounding!
Got me thinkin'
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Shexooo
Stay Positive! |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/3/2008 |
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| I like the tautness in this, the control heightening the impact |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
4/27/2008 |
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| lol. With grim determination the zippers will remain forever. Excellent Liz |
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| Reviewed by Olita Williams |
4/26/2008 |
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*on the barb of your smile* what a wonderful snapshot. Thank you for this sensual offering.
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| Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp |
4/25/2008 |
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| Electric, these mundane thoughts almost sizzle to life. I don't know why but it makes me think about going out and smelling the roses I meant to ignore today. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/20/2008 |
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| clever, cute & catchy ... heightened humor, indeed ... luv the imagery ... |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
4/20/2008 |
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Very clever and enjoyable, Kate. The end is incredibly dynamic and precise.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
4/19/2008 |
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A witty bit of convergence you give us Kate! Now, how do you know we want to be "spared" of those poems in hiding?
Cheers and love ~~ Micke |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/19/2008 |
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Delightfully amusing and humorously creative as you can do. Glad you are doing okay...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
4/18/2008 |
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Well, I must say I don't think I will ever think of zippers in quite the same way! hee, hee...
But with all that plastic coating they put on the teeth nowadays, do zippers still rust? For this poem's sake, I hope so. :~)
So uniquely you... Love it!
Cryssa :~) |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
4/18/2008 |
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hahahahahahaaaaaaaaaa
and a big awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
love it!!! so creative........got frosting??? :) pax A |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
4/18/2008 |
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| Kate, there's so much to like in this writing. I'd say it's clever and caused this reader to smile and enjoy to the end. |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
4/18/2008 |
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"The thread of me catches
on the barb of your smile
as with precision you eye
the fine point of my needle." This my friend is beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
4/18/2008 |
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| Kate this is cleaver and makes me smile :) |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
4/18/2008 |
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Kate,
Everything would be so much easier if it were a velcro world. (lol)
Good one. Excellent metaphors. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
4/17/2008 |
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| You have one incredible way to think! This is excellent. I love the last line. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
4/17/2008 |
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| Very nice writing Kate,enjoyed..take care...HUgsssss |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
4/17/2008 |
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Wow I love ...we’re zipped ‘til our teeth
rust together
Beautifully expressed
Excellent creative write!!!
Brilliant Piece!!
Peace Love And Hugssss....Morning Star
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
4/17/2008 |
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Yep...zipped up and sealed in an ambrace that is a wonderful haven for true hearts.
Blessings and love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by H Cruz |
4/17/2008 |
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| Now I'm a big fan of duct tape but I like your words much better. ;) |
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| Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. |
4/17/2008 |
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Outstanding poetry my friend. Beautiful and flowing......peaceful.....
Much love,
Bill :-) |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
4/17/2008 |
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| omg Kate, this is amazing. I absolutely love it! |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
4/17/2008 |
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| Splediforous relationship poem... I love the analogies here... I like each strophe for a different reason. 5, 6 and the last are my very favorites... perfect ending too-- visual, but something more than that... it contains such a powerful resolution, that the reader cannot help but feel that-- up to his chin... --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/17/2008 |
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I like this one Kate, the balance of velcro on one side against the zipper on the other is like a casual affair only to satisfy desire compared to the quality and strength of love that is meant to last forever. Well done my dear friend. enjoyed this one.
hugs
Pops
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
4/17/2008 |
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Me Gawd, Girl, you've gone daft! And, to think, you remember every blasted move to move, and finally surrender! What lengths you do take in poetry telling your tales... and this is dayum goodun' Your mind and the US Government; dysfunctional but effective! Great writing, too!
- Bill
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
4/17/2008 |
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| Again the expansive sense of beauty avails itself _ evol smaerd .~.Tedso |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/17/2008 |
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| love this!! fantastic, creative write! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/17/2008 |
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| If this isn't an award winning gem,I don't know what would be! I love your sense of humor Kate!;-)Unique and delightful!ET |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
4/17/2008 |
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| You are an insane female-type person . . . I'd love to sit down and have a few with ya . . . I love your take on just about everything . . . Even silly stuff . . . Uh huh, like this . . . Love it I tell you . . . |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
4/17/2008 |
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| Really enjoyed this picture of fumbling bliss. |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
4/17/2008 |
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| Wow. Wow. Beyond that, speechless. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
4/17/2008 |
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| Kate you have the most amazing mind and put the most unique spins on your poetry, what metaphors! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/17/2008 |
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Kate,
Oooohhhhhhh - s u b l i m e, to be meshed this close!!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/17/2008 |
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Delightful write, Kate; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :D |
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