by Robby Baby Dark Poet of Amour
Thursday, April 17, 2008
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This is a song about both the good and bad sides of relationships
She sang a scintillating song,
sang a song that sung away the wrong,
sang a song that felt so right,
sang away my rife life, full of strife.
She sang a scintillating beat,
that brang the happiness up to my feet,
beneath me, in the earth,
a source of joy, never to be replete.
She sang a song that could do no wrong,
directed me to the happiness that was there all along,
and I thanked her for singing her song,
the melody that was within me,
but was hidden by me, myself, all along.
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|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Beautiful sentimental write remembering her for the music she could give you. She seems to be a blessing sent from God to you and you have taken upon yourself to honor her.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|This is just absolutely BEAUTIFUL!
I'm glad "she" did!
Your heart was open and receptive to it's meaning! Thank you Robert for sharing!
Warmest Blessings, TRUE LOVE, BRIGHT LIGHT, and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Shexooo
A Song - Such an elegant offering full of blessings!