This poem was inspired by a comment that either Karen or Karla left on a previous poem posting, regarding how, as twins, they are each other's "rock."
I'll dedicate this to my Nate.
You are my rock, sturdy and strong
You love, whether I’m right or wrong
You listen when the night is long
You are just like my favorite song
I heard your tune, right from the start
Your melody is in my heart
Although, right now, we are apart
From you, I could never depart.
You roll through life’s punches with grace
You know dreams have a time and place
In your own way, you are an ace
I see it on your smiling face
You’d anchor me, if I should fall
Because of you, I’m standing tall
There is no one else I would call
When I’m with you, I have it all.
You are my rock, if miles away
You help me to laugh every day
You are my light when skies are gray
From your heart, I could never stray
For many years, you have been there
You have proven how much you care
There is nothing that could compare
To the outstanding love we share.
© 2008 – Jill Eisnaugle’s Poetry Collection
Houston's 1560 The Game
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|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Beautifully and sentimentally penned!!!|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|The support that comes from someone you love is perfectly stated here...
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Something worth holding on to.
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|I really liked the poem.. I think many of us have a "ROCK" , we can lean on........M|
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Jill, this poem demonstrates a love that "no" one could take away from you or your brother. It's a love that stands strong regardless of the winds that come against it. Great!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|That kind of love is rare and should be treasured and never taken for granted but I know Jill your heart is so full of love for your man that you will never do that.
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|A wonderful contribution to the way we should love...and be loved! Very well done, Jill...
Love and Appreciation ~~ Micke
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|a very wonderful write|
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|Beautiful tribute to beautiful and talented women and your lovely Nate. Deborah:)|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Beautifully penned, Jill, glad our comment inspired you to write this for your Nate. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Lew Duffey
|This is a wonderful love sonnet.