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Touch
by Sanja Dayslink
Monday, April 21, 2008
Rated "R" by the Author.
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How wonderful the mind can be and such lovely fantasies we create! This is my muse coming to surface for a much needed message. |
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Yearning from desire
You opened the floodgates
Touched the soul
Made me shake, quiver, and roll
Yearning from desire
You taunted and teased
Touched the soul
Made me wanting, craving, for more
Yearning from desire
You just disappeared
Touched the soul
Made me empty, crying, and lull
Yearning from desire
I will you back
Touch my soul
Yearning for more
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
4/22/2008 |
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I have told others, we don't just write from our life experiences but from our imagination which can take us anywhere we chose to be, this is a wonderful write and I thank you dear Sanja for sharing.
Your friend , Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
4/21/2008 |
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| Doors once opened by those encounters never close. Thank God for new doors waiting to open. You penned it well the yearning.....Deborah:) |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/21/2008 |
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This is the touch of the magic of passion you share with us in this lovely sensitive work. We can hide and escape from passion for years it seems but when it does "touch" us it is hard to ever let it go. The feelings and yearnings are not somehting that can be turned off and on like a switch on the wall. You captured all of this and more in this one dear Sanja...well done.
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Fee |
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