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The Elements and I
by Vesna * Vanessa

Tuesday, April 22, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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whistling between swaying trees
winding  down glazed terraces
claterring and rattling
swishing past hanging  street-lamps
swinging and slamming against their poles
Plunging against the sea-wall
a steady  swell rising
waves  high and even
rhythmically slamming
against whaling rock
attacking, merciless
with wide open mouth
gobbling ..gulping
fuming clouds
black slashing rain
bombarding the innocent land
piercing with tiny cold blades
all it finds in its path
standing with outspread arms
inhaling the Force
by pure
primordial power
opened to new springs
flying with my own wings!


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Reviewed by Liana Margiva 5/3/2008
Very nice work!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Morning Star 4/28/2008
Beautiful picture of nature storm
stunning view of nature
Love your wings!!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Hugessss....Morning star
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 4/25/2008
Great write about nature in all its force. It is a good picture to describe the poem too and loved it first thing this morning going into noontime though. Thank for this**********
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 4/25/2008
Wonderful writing sweet lady...have a wonderful and safe day...HUgsss
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 4/24/2008
I hear the thunder, and crack of lightning; I see the sea splashing against the retaining wall; I hear the wind howling outside formidable in it's banshee wail; and I see you with your arms outstretched, waiting to hug the world.

This poem is what life gives us, as we go through each day. There are no guarantees, but if we can spread our arms like wings, at the end of the day, then our existence has been worth it.

Thank you for sharing, Vesna.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you dearly love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 4/23/2008
Whoa Ves, I could feel the torrid rain and winds!
Loving thunder and lightning in it's raw form! WE are connected! Sure are Electrically and Spiritually! ;)
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo

STay Positive!
STay STrong!
The pict. is disturbingly moving to the core!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/22/2008
Your passionate nature took the storm and made it ferociously wondrous,with thrills in the wind, and desire in every slash of
rain! An exciting tumultuous love fest twixt thee and thor!;-)

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) 4/22/2008
Nothing more beautiful than to see the power of God in His nature. Embracing and Healing! Well Done! Deborah
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 4/22/2008
We are kindred spirits, oh how I love the storm! And I LOVE your poem for you brought the storm to life.

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