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Saw's It All Behind
by Kimmy Van Kooten
Wednesday, April 23, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Artwork by Conni Togel
"Haulin' Ass"
A string a-pullin' Kimmy Ku's, sheep'd in Baa, haulin' ass instead of wool...LOL! |
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See it all behind,
Back n' foregone looks, in mind.
Point on, to the past. . .
See it all behind. . .
Assured, first shall be agone,
Inert's, warming fronts'
See it all behind. . .
Right open, left closed inside
Dark, still lights to Thou!
See it all behind. . .
"Thousands!" , rung I. . .ere, let on. . .
Fall in, reaching. . . fell
See it all behind!
Highest mountains, lo'. I ‘ll climb!
Peaked ass ends on Earth. . .
Saw’s it all behind.
Copyright 2008
Kimmy Van Kooten
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
5/16/2008 |
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Sometimes, it's so good to know that it's all behind!
Fun poem, especially with the picture.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
4/26/2008 |
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| Very cute. Love the picture. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
4/24/2008 |
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Wise wit and wonderful... "Saw's It All Behind" glows.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/24/2008 |
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Just wonderfully beautiful, capturing the moment well....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/24/2008 |
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Sure glad that's behind you! ;-) I think my assets are behind me on that.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
4/24/2008 |
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OH Wow Great Quirks to Quip in Gripe! :)
Haulin Ass-LOL OH! Thats Way CLEVER!!!
I Enjoyed As Always Kimmy!!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
4/24/2008 |
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| Interesting indeed..well done sweet lady...have a wonderful and safe day...HUgssssss |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/24/2008 |
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Multi-layered depth in thought provoking KimmyKu with a twist of humor! Love it - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
4/24/2008 |
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| I gotta think about this one, Kimmy. One can relate to "See It All Behind" in many different directions. Some humor here though. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
4/24/2008 |
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Kimmy,
Love your play on words. I won't as.k no questions for each step I take I fall two behind. Always nice to keep ahead of oneself. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/24/2008 |
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Dear Kimmy, all I see behind me is a big ass...so?
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
4/24/2008 |
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| A lot to think about, Kimmy...and I love the photo! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/23/2008 |
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Interesting and definately one to think about and ponder...
hugs
fee |
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