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Into Us
by Cherise S Carroll
Wednesday, April 23, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Into Us
To what do I owe the pleasure of that smile?
Have you been thinking “It’s been awhile?”
Are you wondering if I’ve missed you too?
No, need to wonder, for indeed it is true !
Kindled spirit - fire ignited from the start,
From the first time you looked into my heart.
Unlocking the door to dormant sentiments
Lulling the storm that till now rained in torrents.
Fortunate am I that you are in my life.
Once condemned to solitude with no one by my side,
Rapture now visits me on a regular basis.
Your feelings reflected by the mutual smiles on our faces.
Outsiders stare - wondering what the secret is.
Unaware of them – we kiss.
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| Reviewed by Joanne Mcclinton (Reader) |
4/11/2013 |
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| Love this x |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/9/2008 |
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A lovely acrostic, Cherise. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
4/27/2008 |
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| I loved this, really beautiful writing. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/24/2008 |
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One to tug on the heart strings and when all is said and done a big smile evolves...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/24/2008 |
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| The one that puts love in your life can take it away also. |
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