|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|A very moving write, that touches the depths of my heart my friend! Your pain can be felt within the lines. There are things in this life I don't think we will every understand. But one thing is for sure God is an all seeing God, who forgives us and gives us strength to go on. A very touching write with powerful imagery that allows the reader a glimpse of a corner of your life. Well done dear friend!
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|George such a heartwrenching write and I feel your hurt but we have o forgive although we may never forget and we may never fully understand why certain things happen. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|We can not deify ourselves when it comes to perfection. I thank God for my Lord and Savior who knows my heart and mind-including my faults. I do know that someday there will be no more tears. Those babies-our nephews-past relatives that died even before they were born, will meet us in heaven. Walking with us on Earth, when Jesus returns to reign literally. Your words have touched me. Thank you|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Oh my Georg! I can hardly comment this is so emotionally charged with such long felt pain and anger, I don't know how you can live without getting rid of it! I hope maybe after all this time writing about it will purge it out of existence, for your soul sake,and for peace of mind!I'll lift it in prayer!
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Some things we carry around as baggage never leave us no matter how we may try. In whatever way we can we must learn to forgive those that hurt us deeply in order for us to carry forward, holding our head high...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
Much of what you write has such a tone of humor to it...and I love those poems...
But then... you throw these deep, heart-felt, soulful writes in... and they touch my heart and my senses and make me want to weep for you/with you...
The heart has no place for anger in it...it is our minds that hold on to the unforgiving thoughts...I believe that is what causes the heartache...the heart and mind fighting for what each perceives is best.
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Why are the saddest things in our lives those that we vividly remember in our darkness? Forgiving is the path to release of heartache, Georg; you are long overdue this release friend!
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|I think it is a tremous and sympathetic write and it made me cry when I read it. You are so forgiving and such a religious person. To you I give the honor today.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Between the pages so much said,,Between the years so much bled.
Heartfelt Georg,, as well as your poem is a masterpiece.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Geoerge, I am sorry about your grief & loss.
Forgiveness is personal thing.
It is not "For" the other person as much is it is For" oneself to move on & let go.
You are a wise man & know what to do for you.
Your heart is good. Your Poem Is A Memory I Thank You For Sharing Depths of Yourself George.
Your A Good Man That Has Seen alot & your also very wise.
Love & Hugs
Embraced ~ Embrassé
psst.....and you have a Fantastic Sense of Humor :)
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Sooooooo painful a poem. No better way can such a feeling be expressed in words.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|That was before my world ended,
a dear John letter I did received,
in the battle field where my buddies
were dying inside tents in green
So powerfully sad, brother, on so many different levels.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
How deeply sorry I am! I can feel your pain, my friend. I understand how you can never forgive and it festers inside your heart and never lets go. I am a Christian, but I still allow my X husband power over me because I cannot let go of the anger I have toward him. He was an abuser, and though it was a long time ago I still feel the pain he would inflict on me. Its hard to forgive something like that. Its no where near the pain you feel, Georg. I will pray for you, dear man.
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|I believe we have the ability to forgive just about anything with the help of God... but to forget is truly another thing my firend,(Hugs) love Holly|
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Oh my friend, don't give her anymore power to hurt you. You have suffered enough and the pain you felt is so evident in this beautifully painful write. Time to forgive, not for her, for you. Love, Bonnie|
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|You have penned this dear friend, from the raw of your soul, wounds not yet healed, your poem drips like blood on to a hot stone, one can feel the sizzle of your hot memories with every drop, Georg, all of us including you, are capable of the worst sins in this world, we under God are one in that, maybe if you think this way, it might easy your pain, and help you to forgive,and don't forget your child is still in Gods arms when you will meet her to hold her, Bless You! Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|Amazing write, yes and only you and a bible can forgive,....sorry about the loss.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Scars such as these do heal old friend but their mark never completely fades away. My heart goes out to you as a father, a grandfather and a friend...
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh myyyyyyyyyyyyyyy,I'm so sorry dear man..such pain in these words..please stay safe and well...Hugssssss,much love to you|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
What more can I say - words, inadequate, except, I'm sorry -
(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla *tears*
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|I could barely stand to read your raw pain, I'm so deeply sorry Georg.|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
I have enjoyed the rhythm and the presentation of the subject dealt. The impressive symbolism and contents made this an outstanding work, and the closing stanza of "Wilted flower in an old Bible" is written with platinum letters.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Most beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!!!!! 'Solitude always does it to you closing the doors to another wind shutting the windows of hope and making your tears to run free'.....'That was before my world ended'......'But to give a flattened dry flower like an old soul in those unreed pages between'.....VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|We can forgive but not forget. Poignant poem.|