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| Reviewed by Nicole Weaver |
8/1/2009 |
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Regis,
This is definitely not nonsense. In my humble opinion it is you showing us time and time again your incredible talent to write verses.
Nicole |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
1/29/2009 |
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Regis~!
Great image . . . great rhyme and meter - excellent penning!!
Best Always,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Cherise Carroll |
7/15/2008 |
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| One man's nonsense is another man's whimsy! Regis, we should all be so lucky to give in to our dreams with total abandon, and then be able to wake AND remember enough to relay the tale! Great work on the theme. I loved it!! I'd share some of my dreams, but someone might call the white jacket brigade after me! Ciao4now, Cherise |
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| Reviewed by Tony Jenkins |
7/11/2008 |
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You crack me up.
That is fantastice. You gotta love the frogs.
Tony
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| Reviewed by Karen Cino |
6/19/2008 |
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This is great. You got to start at the bottom to make your way up to the top. And this, Reg, you surely have done.
Love,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
6/17/2008 |
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Regis
What a card you are. This is hilarious! Keep dreaming, my friend.
Much love,
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/14/2008 |
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| Very nice!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/6/2008 |
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| Ran over a skunk last night with my car, did it ever come home with me with the smell. still on my tires today. Can imagine the muck you picked up from the bottom of the water too. But this write is so magical a write for where it has taken place. Flows along just so. Easily understood. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
5/24/2008 |
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| Very enjoyable fantasy of dreamlike quality plus humor....the title itself is intriguing.....Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
5/13/2008 |
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This is something very playful,
it depicts a whimsical world
that could also amuse children.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Darryn Murphy |
5/12/2008 |
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| excellent poem :) |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
5/9/2008 |
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| Excellent flow~* |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
5/9/2008 |
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hmmm yum! What a dream and what an ending...enjoying the whimsey of this!
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
5/8/2008 |
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| Oh this is FAB, and wota dream too, weird as all dreams are it seems....but wonderful. You woke up to icecream, YES! Better than just a scream ;) Hugs Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Selene Skye |
5/6/2008 |
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Yum, yum yum!!!! I love the playful yet loving rhyme of joy and earth melodies replete throughout this poem!
Hugs
Selene |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
5/4/2008 |
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...found in light of dreams...waters...and beneath...the touch of humor surfaces...and we find yet emotion as its treasure.
excellent Regis...
John |
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| Reviewed by Dee C. |
5/4/2008 |
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I love the whimsy and the rhyme!
A wonderful write!! |
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| Reviewed by Jayne Waggoner (Reader) |
5/1/2008 |
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| thanks for the chuckle. A skillful dream mode. |
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| Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink |
4/30/2008 |
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Beautifully penned. Our dreams are our thoughts, as our words are out thoughts. I came up with a short story while shaving my legs...so nothing is that unusual. Well done.
Sanja xo |
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| Reviewed by RM Green |
4/30/2008 |
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I LOVE the whimsical movement of this piece.... it certainly made this gal SMILE!!
Thanks for the love today, Regis... I REALLy needed it!
RM |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
4/30/2008 |
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| ENJOYED SO MUCH, thank you. Love the flow and LOL. Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
4/29/2008 |
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Thank you dear brother Regis, and you have made me smile in your endearing way. I loved reading this, and enjoyed the humor. Did you ask the girl from Bombay who worked for EBay if she could swing a few deals for you. LOL. Thank you for sharing, because you made my day a nice one with this piece.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp |
4/28/2008 |
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| Fun to read as I am sure it was to write. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
4/28/2008 |
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Outstanding write Regis
I must say and very creative
Thanks for sharing
Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
4/27/2008 |
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| humerous verse Reg, but I'm afraid you poemed it just the way dreams are, nice humeorus piece to read |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
4/27/2008 |
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| This is a real sing-songy dream. It doesn't seem like nonsense to me. ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
4/27/2008 |
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I dream of streams and rivers also, it's healing
and meditative to be on a river fishing. |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
4/27/2008 |
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Interesting..hummmmmm now I am waiting to hear the dream :)
I love to hear dreams as you now. They are our minds trick master & problem solvers I feel.
I Loved our Poem about memories flair & fun intricate delves of burdens burried deep, but not to deep that self acceptance is hidden.....well thats my twist on dream analizing your write ;
Love & Hugs
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Pfft!!! OX
OH...Guess Who |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
4/27/2008 |
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Regis nothing we write is nonsence, it s part of our thoughts, dreams or memories and always great to share, thank you for sharing and I will share ice cream with you now.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
4/26/2008 |
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I enjoyed this, Good job with the rhyming.
Take care, Pierre |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
4/26/2008 |
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Reg, very entertaining, I loved it..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/26/2008 |
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I want ice-cream toooooo...and promise to share with you!!
TinkaSweets has no other treats
But for all I know...this is just a show
To hide some hurt....send by a black bird!!
Nonsense or not...I liked this alot!!
Love TinkaSweets
XXXXXX |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
4/26/2008 |
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| Regis, dreams offer us some great images and you've brought them to life in your words. I truly enjoyed every verse and got a kick out of it. |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
4/26/2008 |
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| Wooooooooooooooow this blew me away my friend. It rhmes just like a typical Somali poem |
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| Reviewed by Tiana ~ |
4/26/2008 |
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| This poem is not nonsense at all, Reg ... Wonderfully written and very enjoyable ... |
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| Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar |
4/26/2008 |
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Very fun, I found myself chuckling as I read it and enjoyed the end. Dreams seem to rarely be so upbeat - - did you emphasize the happy and overlook the dark lurking beyond the next ripple?
Terry |
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| Reviewed by H Cruz |
4/26/2008 |
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| That was cute and inconsiquential, like laughter on a moonlit swill. |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
4/26/2008 |
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| Light and carefree. I had to become an imaginary diver to I could view all those scenes from the bottom of the various aquatic pools. Fun, until the dream ended. LOL |
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| Reviewed by J. Pajot |
4/26/2008 |
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Cute and upliftingly enjoyable read. Brought a smile...thanks, Reg.
All good things to you and yours,
Jim |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
4/26/2008 |
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| Delightful..You are the king of Rhyme!.........M |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/26/2008 |
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You never said, at the end, which kind of ice cream, chocolate I presume? licking or with a spoon?
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/25/2008 |
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Very unusual for you, Regis. This does have a dream-like quality to it. I like the first verse most of all, though verse three made me laugh. Thank you for sharing the lighter side of your writing:) Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Kopp |
4/25/2008 |
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"She works for Ebay??" Cool ideas, though nonsensical, like dreams usually turn out. Your rhymes sway the poem in different directions.
Peace,
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/25/2008 |
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I find it full of whimsy and delightful Reg! Reminds me of an old scottish poem I have somewhere, can't remember his (authors) name.
It's a fine change of paace;-)Thanks for sharing!
Love,
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
4/25/2008 |
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| If you nix the ebay/bombay stanza, you my friend, have the makings of an excellent poem that children would love- I could see this illustrated-great job :) Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
4/25/2008 |
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| Cute dream you penned into a poem. Ending with a gal on your arm and some icecream! Now thats what I call a great dream! Cheers, Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
4/25/2008 |
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I like this one a lot Regis..
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
4/25/2008 |
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| playful, I like it! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/25/2008 |
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Yummy, exactly the way to end all dreams, always on a high note....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
4/25/2008 |
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| This is funny from the bottom of my tummy :) |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
4/25/2008 |
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| R&R, rhythm and rhyme. This is a side of you I have not previously seen Reg. You truly possess multidimensional writing skills. I should be so lucky. Thanks for sharing this great little, dream ditty with us. Jon Michael Willey |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
4/25/2008 |
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This is a fun piece of poetry Reg. Sounds like your dreams are exciting too.
Blessings and love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
4/25/2008 |
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| Love this sweet man,wonderful writing as always..have a wonderful evening...HUgss |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
4/25/2008 |
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Loved it...flowed smooth, swift and with a wonderful rhythm...a delightful write my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Janice Springs Hamilton |
4/25/2008 |
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| Oooooohhhhhh.... I so enjoyed reading this... the rhythm, the rhyme, delightful! Blessings, Janice |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
4/25/2008 |
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| I'm glad you've found someone Reg. Delightful and cheerful write. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Jean Pike |
4/25/2008 |
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| A most enjoyable poem, Reg, but yours always are. I haven't been by here nearly often enough lately :-) |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
4/25/2008 |
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I love it!!!! is very unique dream
and excellent story line awesome rhyme
Fantastic imagery and flow!!
Brilliant writing Reg
Peace Love and Hugessss....Morning star
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
4/25/2008 |
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Hi Regis:
I sure enjoyed this delightful read! Great rhymes indeed!!!
Sandie May :o) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/25/2008 |
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Cute write, mon ami, c'est bon!
(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami, Karen Lynn dans Texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
4/25/2008 |
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You made me smile... :~)
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
4/25/2008 |
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| Cute, enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
4/25/2008 |
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| lots of rhyme scheme here...the storyline reminds me of that animated movies..."Walking" where the boy keeps changing scenes and talking to different people. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/25/2008 |
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| Ah to have a nice longboard to surf with and just maybe her in the pic as well...;) ed |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
4/25/2008 |
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Reg...a cool write. As I read the words, I thought it would be neat to have the French version as well as English, like you sometimes do.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/25/2008 |
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| Love the rhyme and cute sayings that made a part of it. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/25/2008 |
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Unusual for you, rhyming verse - but o, so perfectly penned! Well done, Regis.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/25/2008 |
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| A dream worth having, Regis! Loved the twist at the end... Dreams DO become reality, after all! But yes, the underwater worlds are very appealing in dream form and we can experience much liberation through exploring their potential. Like thinking about things upside down... I would lie on the floor when young and imagine turning the house upside down and walking about on the ceiling! And Chelsea sounds very suave. Perhaps, even, an Owl and the Pussycat scenario?? Love the lift in this poem. Bless you, Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/25/2008 |
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| pretty clever! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
4/25/2008 |
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Regis,
I'm sure you know I like it. Anything that rhymes is my cup of tea but I prefer it on a settee and not on the bottom of the sea, perhaps with a little bit of honey. Sorry to rain on your parade but you got me started. (lol) Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
4/25/2008 |
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| LOL - Very good Regis. You had me in stitches. Well done my friend. Keep it up and God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
4/25/2008 |
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You bring many smiles to me with this one, Reg! You've taken a whimsical dream and produced a happy, whimsical poem! THANKS be that your muse is back with you :o)
Love and Appreciation ~~ Micke |
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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
4/25/2008 |
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So cute and clever Reg...
ann |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
4/25/2008 |
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Rhymes Galore! This is so creative. It's great that you can draw poetic inspiration from a dream. Be well, Regis...
Sage |
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