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If Only (#2)
by Amber V Moonstone

Monday, April 28, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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If you feel that you are trapped in a situation that is impossible to get out of. This is a message to tell you, Yes you can, and it will be more beautiful!


If Only! (#2)

by Amber "V" Moonstone

4/28/08

If Only, the Moon would kiss your face
each time I thought of you.
The moonbeams would erase,
the loneliness of feeling so blue.

If Only, the Sun would shine down,
when your soul was cold and sad
and It could take away your frown,
then everything wouldn't seem so bad.

If Only, you would realize the truth,
and walk out that caged door,
You would know this was all worth,
the pain that lives no more.

If Only, I had a crystal ball,
I could tell you everything would be all right,
and you would be able to stand tall,
and your future would be beaming bright.

IF ONLY !

 

 

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Reviewed by Lois Christensen 5/8/2008
IF YOU HAD A CRYSTAL BALL AND COULD GIVE ME MY HOROSCOPE, WHAT WOULD IT BE? i AM A SCORPIO. i KNOW YOU WOULD BE TRUTHFUL AND RIGHT ON THE DOT CAUSE YOU HAVE SUCH SINCERE WRITINGS AND FEELINGS. Good poem afteral, you are No. 1 for me.
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 5/2/2008
The light of truth shines in this beautiful work of art. It is quite amazing that we both wrote the same title on the same day. Our Muses must be related!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 4/28/2008
Truth and wisdom in this heartfelt piece. "If only" we had the power to erase alll the hurt and tears and feel the smiles in the sunlight, just heavenly beautiful...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Barbara Smith 4/28/2008
Amber, words from the heart and spoken in truth & sincerity...many will get a lesson from this one...great job!
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 4/28/2008
This is a sweet write,, How many times do we say ,,"If Only"? Excellent Poem Amber.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 4/28/2008
Yes. A crystal ball to show everything will be all right. Love this love reassurance poem. Excellent. Liz
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 4/28/2008
IF ONLY ARE SAD WORDS.... WELL SAID THOUGH...
Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/28/2008
Very tenderly written with care and love. We can often wish for someone's life to change and for their freedom but the sad fact is only they can set themselves free. Freedom always comes with a price, often more than most are willing, or able, to pay. All we can do then is to offer our friendship, love and understanding.

hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 4/28/2008
Amber this is for me and for many others like me. I stay alone in europe with my wife and children living in africa. Imagine
Reviewed by William Bonilla 4/28/2008
Talented and beautifully expressed
worthy of a response
Thank you for this heavenly Gem
Love & peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 4/28/2008
If only...you can imagine how your words go inside, like rain drops in a freshly ploughed soil...

Georg
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 4/28/2008
by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley (author) at 4/28/2008 6:10:14 AM
Beautiful Morning To YOU Viv,
Your Words Are Beautiful & even the withered soul can find Hope & Faith In the Soul of Your Verses Here
a new rejuvenation of spirit & life :)
Love & Hugs Always
Embraced ~ Embrassť


(Vickie's review)
Reviewed by Morning Star 4/28/2008
Beautifully writing and expressed message
Yes no one should stay in any situation
She/he are not happy with.
At times we all wish a crystal ball
would give us the answers
This is a beautifully writing and expressed words of
A very sad piece
wonderful message!!
Brilliant write!
Peace Love and Light...and Hugesss...Morning Star
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 4/28/2008
Oh my..If only...I love this..Excellent writing sweet lady..have a wonderful and safe day beautiful woman...Hugssssss
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 4/28/2008
"If Only" we could all have a crystal ball that tells everything will be all right... Very thoughtful. Blessings.
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 4/28/2008
"IF ONLY" is AWESOME! Special to a heart NOT KNOWING!
You speak so calmly and lovingly Viv! (Amber V)
I love the structure of this 'HOPEFUL' poem! I've been here, and If only, YOU would take the 1st. step needed, you would find a light at the end of that long dark tunnel!
Write On!
STay Positive!
STay STrong!
Warm BIG Hugs, Warrior Purple PaSSion Sheeeoxoooo
Enjoy! Your day Sis!
I see colors of pastels here, bringing clarity to a sad and lonely situation!



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