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Poet vs Others
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Monday, April 28, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Only the strong survive, others bull and jive.

Others will make you,
or they will break you.
That is if you are weak,
any type future can be bleak.
Count yourself in too,
especially with the boo.

Some people give up easy,
others are harder to break,
I'd say poets and writers,
got to learn too take.
Take all the crap,
at night don't let it affect the nap,
above all be cool don't zap.

They should get well adapted,
learn the negativity in not being accepted.
My father didn't even accept me,
so I got a great start for free,
being born to a deadbeat was my fee.
I'm use to non-acceptance,
but I still figure in my chance,
go with lifes romance.

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Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 4/28/2008
i love that you can take the reaer on a journey of many emotions to feeling positive and encouraged by your own wonderful outlook!
Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz 4/28/2008
I agree... I like you because you lay it all out. You don't add icing or whipped cream. Good work... Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 4/28/2008
"My father didn't even accept me,
so I got a great start for free,
being born to a deadbeat was my fee.
I'm use to non-acceptance,
but I still figure in my chance,
go with lifes romance."
You said it all so very well in these lines, great one!



Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/28/2008
good one, gem; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D



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