|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Love the imagery in the lines Kate! and word choices, smooth on the tongue and mind!
Spain is one of my dreams, glad you got yours! :)
Happy Blessings! and Very Happy Birthday Year of Joy, happiness and GREAT Health!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Shexooo
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Awesome write love the beautiful visuals
ten days go by very fast wen you are having fun
Wishing you a very happy Birthday!!
Peace Love and Light...And many happy birthday Hugessss
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Splendid Kate, flying kites is almost magical...enjoy your holiday as I too, am off to a sunny beach in Florida...
peace and love, Carole~
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|awesome. excellent. Liz|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Kate, this is just beautiful...so visual...and the last line, well, it tugs at my heart. Have a wonderful vacation. Enjoy your birthday. You will be missed.|
|Reviewed by Charlie
|A beautiful send-off--
with a decade behind them, and having explored (undoubtedly) every barn, fence and chicken roost in the neighborhood, now they explore the skies... I can feel the taut pull of the string, and the stubborn loopty-loops kites do insist on making before they're full-sail
But more than those lines, I love the gentle, subtle other story-- between the lines-- of him for all those years letting her hold the string to his star-- of him giving her the sway--the say-- and of her, making it/him fly higher and higher. And of the mutual trust, and fun of the relationship. --Quite a ride.
Have fun, chick. And a very Happy Birthday to you. --Charlie
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Incredible living cinema you've created here.
happy Birthday and enjoy your special day and Spain.
Blessings and love,Susan
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|Airborne beauty once again hovering high-above_Then bringing it home.~.evol smaerd * Ted|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Kate, this is so beautiful and imaginative. Have a wonderful time in Spain celebrating your birthday! A most fantastic way to start the new year....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|I love it! Happy birthday!|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Happy 51st dear Kate and I hope it is a great one, have lots of fun and make a memory you'll never foret. Thank you for sharing another wonderful write with us.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|a wondrous write so well penned!! have a grand time!|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|awww,, I just turned 51 on April 18th,, think I just might join you lol Have a great time,, stay safe,,as always your poem is fabulous!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Never let go, Kate, and Happy 51! And Happy 1,333rd vacation, too. And you say I take lots of vacations - Hah!
And please tell your son that I truly admire his work in Peru; we truly need many more like him today.
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|Happy Birthday Kate...Soak up some spanish sunshine for me!
I've always been a kite flying fan and have sacraficed several to trees over the years, this brought memories to mind and smiles...thanks
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|Fabulous writing... as always...
Everyone should have someone who loves them enough to help repair our mishaps and set us on the path to flying again.
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Very accurate, subtle writing from the title until the very last line.
I love the "diamond dipped deep into the dancing blue".
Happy BD Kate!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Oh Sweet Kate, I surely do love this one. It has such a caring nurturing feel to it of childhood sweethearts who grow up together and never lose that young magic of youth because of it. To have such a devotion and desire to please and guide must be one of the utmost pleasures of this world. Your write brought back memories of my own childhood crushes and loves that though not thought of often are stirred by such sweet words as these. Enjoy your vacation and don't forget pictures...
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Oh My goodness what a way with words, you have described a perfect moment so beautifully, I felt like I was there watching and those last lines stole my heart, my breath!|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Aw, darlin yourself . . . We'll miss you, me more than the rest of the riffraft here . . . LOL . . . The poem . . . Exquisite . . .|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Happy Birthday Kate,have a great time..stay safe and well...Hugssss|
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|What a way to pre-celebrate a Happy Birthday and Vacation: wafting along the breeze with a Kate kite! Enjoy yourself totally...but know you'll be missed :o)
Vaya con Dios ~~ Micke
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Happy birthday, (((Sweet Kate))); have a wonderful time in Espana!!
Very well penned/illustrated; brava!
(((HUGS))) y amor mucho, tu amiga en America, Karen (Carina) Lynn. :D
Mi Espanol no bueno! LOL Es muy lousy!! LOL
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Primero, Feliz Cumpleanos! Cinquente y uno, eh? Yo, solo tres anos atras. LOL
Segundo, tiene un buen vacaciones! :)
Tres, me gusto tu poem. :) She brought back inadequacy back to life - beautiful.
Okay, okay, so mi espanol no bueno. LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.